tht was seriously cooooooolhope u do more!
a toast to you!
this has to be more thn 50 chars long, sorry. iiiiiiiiiiiitaaaaaaaaaaaaccccchhhhhhhhhhiiiiii rules!
Whos holding you down?
Made it so easy to usurp my crown.
Keep making excuses, inside them you'll drown.
I see no chains.
Aside from the demeaning taunts, from your brain.
You make this so hard that you just end up drained.
Whats holding you back?
Broke your word, so cover your track.
Who's going to make up for all that you lack?
You're not on a leash!
Soak this all in, like you're just a leech.
Make light of such dark pains, as if you were bleach...
You're stopping yourself....
Holding on to whats worthless, will not give you wealth.
You hide from the truth, then take pride in your stealth.
... Not Ever Again...
@.@ hah... as expected from the master poet..good job
keep up the good work..
Powerful poem with powerful rhymes..![]()
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Meh... I wasn't too impressed with this myself. But I had it in my head, and needed to post it. AO serves as quite an efficient archive for my brain farts.![]()
... Not Ever Again...
that poems quite true and inderstandable really nice work ph ^__^
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