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    this is wht i call the prove to someone that im not an impaster this is ma own poem

    my hands are frozen
    my mouth stopped talkin
    my legs are broken
    my heart stopped beating
    my blood is an explousion
    my mind stopped thinking
    my hands stopped writing
    i wish im in the ausion
    no one around
    no one behind
    no ships no boats
    only in my mind
    not looking behind
    always look forward hardly never look back
    keep on faith hell never let you down
    beat the hate
    and hope youre glad
    at the end of the way you wont be sad
    keep smilling it makes ppl wonder wht ur up to

    black 4 darkness red 4 blood and loves for losers

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    Re: this is wht i call the prove to someone that im not an impaster this is ma own po

    You don't have to prove anything to me.... I have no doubt in my mind that you wrote this. For what its worth... its not bad. I like ut.
    However, there are errors (which would be expected if English isn't your first languege). If typing in microsoft word is your secret to editing, perhaps you should continue to use that.
    Honestly, I use word document programs to edit my work before I post it as well.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: this is wht i call the prove to someone that im not an impaster this is ma own po

    thnx alot for replying and i really dont have alot time to write on the word be4 puting sth in here
    specially when im gana travel at the end of the next week wish me luck
    and theres not net in that country exept in rare places and too expinsive
    and yeah im oreginally arabian but ive no matter with understanding language but its hard to write the exact spelling or to stick to gramer
    i know for sure that ive got lots of mistakes but umm im hoping to be an english professor in future
    but im only 15 and in our countries not so many ppl can master this language specially in my age so i hope you understand how my hard working to learn and taste the sweetness of english cuz i consider it my main language after arabic and japanese ofcourse
    yeah i know im talkin too much
    but im sooooooooooo happy to see your posting sis thnx alot
    sionara
    keep smilling it makes ppl wonder wht ur up to

    black 4 darkness red 4 blood and loves for losers

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