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    Why?

    You once made me happy,
    You were the one who made me laugh
    when i was blue you'd make me smile
    but now not even half

    I cryed for you,
    Sighed for you
    but still you ignored me
    you shunted me aside...
    You had my heart, you stole the key
    but now my heart asks "why?"

    Did you not care for me as i cared for you?
    Why do you do the things you do?
    You used to tell me what was on your mind
    you used to be so kind.

    Don't worry about me...if you ever did...
    I shan't cry nolonger,
    I can't
    My mind has gone into darkness
    I feel no more pain, it twas my heart you slayn'
    ...Goodbye...
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    Re: Why?

    This was written well...I am again truly sorry that the pains of love have gotten u...I hope that we ur friends...can help u through this ordeal...I know love can be hard but u must never give up.

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    Re: Why?

    i know what would go with this poem like really well.................Sorrowful angel but however i too am sorry that u have to go through this

    I am a sage....the light of elements

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    Re: Why?

    you think, perhaps. ok thanks..........
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    Re: Why?

    wow that was pretty awesome, i like the way you wrote it, the poem is pretty touchy. keep it up man.

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    Re: Why?

    thanks. i try my best, i write fanfics too, maybe thats why i have alright writing skills?
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    Re: Why?

    what about hand writting??? mine was really crappy at first then i learned a new style of writting and its like im the only one who can read it (well me and my mom and them but thats about it)

    I am a sage....the light of elements

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    Re: Why?

    I have really fancy old kinda writing apparantly. I love to use the coligrapghy pen over the pens that everyone else is using. I have very neat writing most say...buti think otherwise obviously lol.
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