Why listen to what everyone else says?
Why care what people think?
Why give into their desires?
Don't you have amind of your own?
Can't you think on your own?
Do you need to be guided like a dog?
Do you want to be popular?
Do you want fake friends?
Do you want to be hated by the people you hurt?
Do you want to hurt innocent people?
Do you want a name for yourself?
Why do drugs?
Is it to be popular?
Is it to be cool?
Because you're pressured?
Because you'll be a loser if you don't?
Because you want a life?
Why listen to idiots?
Why listen to fakes?
Why not be yourself?
Very good poem it makes alot of sense. I look forward to reading your next one.
Wow! I love it ^_^ It's so true and realistic. Nothing wrong about it.
O.O lots of feeling in this one
sounds like your angry at someone because of a specific event ...
so is this based on something that happend or you just came up with it?
two thumbs up! :D:
I was really mad when I wrote it and I mean really mad. Let's say I'm mad at the way our society is. that everyone's a conformist that no one has their own opinion that they can't think for themselves...IMO anyways..
My my that is scary... :p why am i reading this poem? haha jk
oooh all that anger of yours got chanelled in here..this poem just let it go all out~ boom~! :lol2: a good way of letting go of anger poem is i'd say...
a good way of expressing deepest feeling and hurtful moments... sigh~ sheesh