why

leftinthedark · Sep 09, 2007, 04:46 PM

Lets go for a walk you say.
I follow you into the dark woods.
I feel safe because your with me.
But something deep inside me tells me I should be scared.
How can I be scared of the one I love?
Next thing I knew you push me down to the wet grownd.
In your hand you hold a knife.
Why was all I was able to say before my blood hit the floor.
And my heart sliped away!
by leftinthedark aka nicole!

leftinthedark · Sep 09, 2007, 04:47 PM

this one is not a really good one of mine and sorry for the bad spelling

P.R. Princess · Sep 09, 2007, 04:59 PM

O.O Wow that was awsome
I love it soo much.
it was like so asome.
Keep it up.
I hope to see more great work.^.^

Alucard_ML · Sep 09, 2007, 11:17 PM

Wow... that's some poem....
It is a good poem Nicole, so i hope to see some more

overload · Sep 10, 2007, 12:13 AM

Nicole. this poem is gritty and dark,
I really liked it, so there.
I don't care if you think it sucks, me I really enjoyed it.

*RayMe* · Sep 10, 2007, 07:02 AM

wow...this is like a scary movie... sheesh.. @.@ to be backstabbed huh...nasty... :/ by the one u trust most.. *sighs* ^^ good job...keep up the good work...love the imaginary in this 1...

Sep 09, 2007, 04:46 PM	#1 (permalink)
leftinthedark Newbie Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: ny Posts: 49 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 662	why Lets go for a walk you say. I follow you into the dark woods. I feel safe because your with me. But something deep inside me tells me I should be scared. How can I be scared of the one I love? Next thing I knew you push me down to the wet grownd. In your hand you hold a knife. Why was all I was able to say before my blood hit the floor. And my heart sliped away! by leftinthedark aka nicole! __________________ sasuke is mine.
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Sep 09, 2007, 04:47 PM	#2 (permalink)
leftinthedark Newbie Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: ny Posts: 49 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 662	Re: why this one is not a really good one of mine and sorry for the bad spelling __________________ sasuke is mine.
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Sep 09, 2007, 04:59 PM	#3 (permalink)
P.R. Princess NalaMidnight Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Virginia Posts: 900 Thanks: 3 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 14,170	Re: why O.O Wow that was awsome I love it soo much. it was like so asome. Keep it up. I hope to see more great work.^.^ __________________ ~GUNSLINGER~A7X=MIA~ ~ MYSPACE~AWESOME PLACE TO SAVE~ ~I give my heart and everything to my sailor~
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Alucard_ML Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Denmark Posts: 326 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 2,220	Re: why Wow... that's some poem.... It is a good poem Nicole, so i hope to see some more __________________ This awesome sig is made by Ryomakurosaki
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overload Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On the farside of the Moon. Posts: 489 Thanks: 8 Thanked 14 Times in 13 Posts Credits: 13,054	Re: why Nicole. this poem is gritty and dark, I really liked it, so there. I don't care if you think it sucks, me I really enjoyed it.
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Sep 10, 2007, 07:02 AM	#6 (permalink)
RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,148	Re: why wow...this is like a scary movie... sheesh.. @.@ to be backstabbed huh...nasty... :/ by the one u trust most.. sighs ^^ good job...keep up the good work...love the imaginary in this 1... __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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