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    Lets go for a walk you say.
    I follow you into the dark woods.
    I feel safe because your with me.
    But something deep inside me tells me I should be scared.
    How can I be scared of the one I love?
    Next thing I knew you push me down to the wet grownd.
    In your hand you hold a knife.
    Why was all I was able to say before my blood hit the floor.
    And my heart sliped away!
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    Re: why

    this one is not a really good one of mine and sorry for the bad spelling

    sasuke is mine.

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    Re: why

    O.O Wow that was awsome
    I love it soo much.
    it was like so asome.
    Keep it up.
    I hope to see more great work.^.^

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    Re: why

    Wow... that's some poem....
    It is a good poem Nicole, so i hope to see some more

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    Re: why

    Nicole. this poem is gritty and dark,
    I really liked it, so there.
    I don't care if you think it sucks, me I really enjoyed it.

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    Re: why

    wow...this is like a scary movie... sheesh.. @.@ to be backstabbed huh...nasty... :/ by the one u trust most.. *sighs* ^^ good job...keep up the good work...love the imaginary in this 1...

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