When is the pain going to end
When is the suffering too much
Now that i'm here alone
I wonder what's going on
Why do we always fight
Why do we always argue
Can't we have one day
One day of peace and quiet
We hurt each other everyday
With little things that the other says
The hurting of myself
Comes from the pain I cause you
I know that I've hurt you
I know that I still do
So All i'm asking
Is why do you choose me
There's other girls who love you
Maybe more than I do
Yet you don't love them
Not like you say you love me
We fight and then we breakup
we breakup then we makeup
When will the cycle end
When will we be happy again
interesting poem AngelicDemon....
Originally Posted by AngelicDemon201092
it's a little sad,at least this is how it seemed to me....
hope to see more from you:2thumbs:
I was..... and I will be sure to write more for you.
Originally Posted by arekandera
WOW Angelic..... I felt that one! wow!!! good job when I read it I felt the pain that you did, like something being torn from your heart, a pice of you, something not explainable. Great poem though I liked it alot I hope to see more from you.
your poems are always so deep! It's sad to me, but I guess poems are like that, keep up the work!
Thanks you guys. I'm glad you like them... and i dunno but I guess I have deep feelings... I'll be sure to write some more.
Great! Your better at it than I am! have fun! Keep up the work! and when you get more up I will go and look!
I love this.........i love how i can conect with this in so many ways this is how me and my ex....but something happend and we could no longer betogether so the cycle ended.....but i love that i really can connmect with this and i hope to see more frome you