Why

!AngelicDemon201092 · Oct 20, 2007, 07:15 PM

Why...

When is the pain going to end
When is the suffering too much
Now that i'm here alone
I wonder what's going on

Why do we always fight
Why do we always argue
Can't we have one day
One day of peace and quiet

We hurt each other everyday
With little things that the other says
The hurting of myself
Comes from the pain I cause you

I know that I've hurt you
I know that I still do
So All i'm asking
Is why do you choose me

There's other girls who love you
Maybe more than I do
Yet you don't love them
Not like you say you love me

We fight and then we breakup
we breakup then we makeup
When will the cycle end
When will we be happy again

arekandera · Oct 21, 2007, 06:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AngelicDemon201092

Why...

When is the pain going to end
When is the suffering too much
Now that i'm here alone
I wonder what's going on

Why do we always fight
Why do we always argue
Can't we have one day
One day of peace and quiet

We hurt each other everyday
With little things that the other says
The hurting of myself
Comes from the pain I cause you

I know that I've hurt you
I know that I still do
So All i'm asking
Is why do you choose me

There's other girls who love you
Maybe more than I do
Yet you don't love them
Not like you say you love me

We fight and then we breakup
we breakup then we makeup
When will the cycle end
When will we be happy again

interesting poem AngelicDemon....
it's a little sad,at least this is how it seemed to me....
hope to see more from you

!AngelicDemon201092 · Oct 22, 2007, 02:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by arekandera

interesting poem AngelicDemon....
it's a little sad,at least this is how it seemed to me....
hope to see more from you

I was..... and I will be sure to write more for you.

Ichigo_06 · Oct 24, 2007, 11:00 AM

WOW Angelic..... I felt that one! wow!!! good job when I read it I felt the pain that you did, like something being torn from your heart, a pice of you, something not explainable. Great poem though I liked it alot I hope to see more from you.

highteckdudu · Oct 25, 2007, 11:42 AM

your poems are always so deep! It's sad to me, but I guess poems are like that, keep up the work!

!AngelicDemon201092 · Oct 25, 2007, 11:54 AM

Thanks you guys. I'm glad you like them... and i dunno but I guess I have deep feelings... I'll be sure to write some more.

highteckdudu · Oct 25, 2007, 12:04 PM

Great! Your better at it than I am! have fun! Keep up the work! and when you get more up I will go and look!

inuyashagurl · Oct 26, 2007, 06:11 PM

I love this.........i love how i can conect with this in so many ways this is how me and my ex....but something happend and we could no longer betogether so the cycle ended.....but i love that i really can connmect with this and i hope to see more frome you

*RayMe* · Oct 29, 2007, 07:10 AM

Hmmm...

"We fight and then we breakup
we breakup then we makeup
When will the cycle end
When will we be happy again"

dont sound happy much... :/ sheesh...

Keep up the good work ok~

Oct 20, 2007, 07:15 PM	#1 (permalink)
!AngelicDemon201092 Banned Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Lindsborg Posts: 155 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 6,221	Why Why... When is the pain going to end When is the suffering too much Now that i'm here alone I wonder what's going on Why do we always fight Why do we always argue Can't we have one day One day of peace and quiet We hurt each other everyday With little things that the other says The hurting of myself Comes from the pain I cause you I know that I've hurt you I know that I still do So All i'm asking Is why do you choose me There's other girls who love you Maybe more than I do Yet you don't love them Not like you say you love me We fight and then we breakup we breakup then we makeup When will the cycle end When will we be happy again
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Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,723	Re: Why WOW Angelic..... I felt that one! wow!!! good job when I read it I felt the pain that you did, like something being torn from your heart, a pice of you, something not explainable. Great poem though I liked it alot I hope to see more from you. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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highteckdudu Where the journey begins! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: The wonderfull world of Minnesota! And I mean that! Posts: 595 Thanks: 3 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Credits: 155,707	Re: Why your poems are always so deep! It's sad to me, but I guess poems are like that, keep up the work! __________________ I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass! Visit www.highteckdudu.webs.com!
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!AngelicDemon201092 Banned Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Lindsborg Posts: 155 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 6,221	Re: Why Thanks you guys. I'm glad you like them... and i dunno but I guess I have deep feelings... I'll be sure to write some more.
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highteckdudu Where the journey begins! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: The wonderfull world of Minnesota! And I mean that! Posts: 595 Thanks: 3 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Credits: 155,707	Re: Why Great! Your better at it than I am! have fun! Keep up the work! and when you get more up I will go and look! __________________ I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass! Visit www.highteckdudu.webs.com!
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Oct 26, 2007, 06:11 PM	#8 (permalink)
inuyashagurl Newbie Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In you heart. Posts: 36 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 212	Re: Why I love this.........i love how i can conect with this in so many ways this is how me and my ex....but something happend and we could no longer betogether so the cycle ended.....but i love that i really can connmect with this and i hope to see more frome you __________________ When you walk away You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,118	Re: Why Hmmm... "We fight and then we breakup we breakup then we makeup When will the cycle end When will we be happy again" dont sound happy much... :/ sheesh... Keep up the good work ok~ __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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