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    Why

    Why...

    When is the pain going to end
    When is the suffering too much
    Now that i'm here alone
    I wonder what's going on

    Why do we always fight
    Why do we always argue
    Can't we have one day
    One day of peace and quiet

    We hurt each other everyday
    With little things that the other says
    The hurting of myself
    Comes from the pain I cause you

    I know that I've hurt you
    I know that I still do
    So All i'm asking
    Is why do you choose me

    There's other girls who love you
    Maybe more than I do
    Yet you don't love them
    Not like you say you love me

    We fight and then we breakup
    we breakup then we makeup
    When will the cycle end
    When will we be happy again

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    Re: Why

    Quote Originally Posted by AngelicDemon201092 View Post
    Why...

    When is the pain going to end
    When is the suffering too much
    Now that i'm here alone
    I wonder what's going on

    Why do we always fight
    Why do we always argue
    Can't we have one day
    One day of peace and quiet

    We hurt each other everyday
    With little things that the other says
    The hurting of myself
    Comes from the pain I cause you

    I know that I've hurt you
    I know that I still do
    So All i'm asking
    Is why do you choose me

    There's other girls who love you
    Maybe more than I do
    Yet you don't love them
    Not like you say you love me

    We fight and then we breakup
    we breakup then we makeup
    When will the cycle end
    When will we be happy again
    interesting poem AngelicDemon....
    it's a little sad,at least this is how it seemed to me....
    hope to see more from you

    "If you need something to worship, then worship life - all life, every last crawling bit of it! We're all in this beauty together!" - Frank Herbert

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    Re: Why

    Quote Originally Posted by arekandera View Post
    interesting poem AngelicDemon....
    it's a little sad,at least this is how it seemed to me....
    hope to see more from you
    I was..... and I will be sure to write more for you.

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    Re: Why

    WOW Angelic..... I felt that one! wow!!! good job when I read it I felt the pain that you did, like something being torn from your heart, a pice of you, something not explainable. Great poem though I liked it alot I hope to see more from you.
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    Re: Why

    your poems are always so deep! It's sad to me, but I guess poems are like that, keep up the work!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Why

    Thanks you guys. I'm glad you like them... and i dunno but I guess I have deep feelings... I'll be sure to write some more.

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    Great! Your better at it than I am! have fun! Keep up the work! and when you get more up I will go and look!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Why

    I love this.........i love how i can conect with this in so many ways this is how me and my ex....but something happend and we could no longer betogether so the cycle ended.....but i love that i really can connmect with this and i hope to see more frome you
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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