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    Why won't these tears stop falling from these eyes?
    Why do the lies keep piling to the skys?
    Why can't I just keep calm.
    Why can't I sleep all night long?

    I do nothing right, but always wrong,
    I just try so hard to get along.
    My heart is heavy and quite unstrong,
    It's almost impossible to soldier on.

    My head aches and my temples throb,
    My heart hurts and my stomach twists,
    My feet are sore from walking long,
    And I can't see through these steamy mists.

    I need a light or hand to guide me,
    Through the darkness, and the dead of night
    A bright light to help me see
    That I can do -something- right.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: why

    When have you done "something wrong"? I'd like to know. Whenever someone does what they feel is right, it usually is (80% of the time). Don't beat yourself up!


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    I hope you find that some one to guide you through your darkness, that was a sad poem, keep a good work! cant wait to see more! yeah! good job! and I aggree with Atomik dont beat your self up.
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    It was more of a refrence to decisions then actions atomik. More an expression of frustration over mistakes then wrong doing. I do my best to do right by everyone. But sometimes the decisions I make, almost always in fact, are wrong.

    THanks Hightech! I'm glad you enjoyed it even though it was sad. I appriciate your commenting my work.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Your very welcome, any thing to help! cant wait to see more! i my self don do a lot of poetry, i have only 2 up here. but yeah any who keep up the good work,maybe the next one will be more cheery. but either way i'm sure i would like it.
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    I didn't used to write poetry at all. I used to be all about short storys but those don't come anymore. I get writers block when I try to do storys. So I do poetry insted it seems to flow out a little easier for me,e ven if I don't really feel like it's "GOOD" poetry.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: why

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    It was more of a refrence to decisions then actions atomik. More an expression of frustration over mistakes then wrong doing. I do my best to do right by everyone. But sometimes the decisions I make, almost always in fact, are wrong.

    THanks Hightech! I'm glad you enjoyed it even though it was sad. I appriciate your commenting my work.
    People make mistakes, it's human nature. Don't beat yourself up over it.


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    Re: why

    I know they make mistakes. Let me feel like I'm the only one damnit. It's more or less an expression of me feeling ****ing sorry for myself.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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