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    Ever since i met you,
    ive asked myself many things i regret asking.
    Why did i meet you?
    why did you stick with me?
    why did you stop it?
    why did you leave?
    why did you break my heart?
    why did you help me?
    and why didn't you listen to me?

    If you love me, you would have left me alone
    to rot, to suffer, to stay where i was, and left untouched.

    why did i love you?
    why did i want more of you?
    why did i help you?
    why did i teach you?
    and why do i miss you?

    u broke my heart, you left me to suffer, but i still forgave you.
    those tears i cried were made by you,
    but im still a friend, im still helping you all the way through.
    your sweetness grew, i knew what i needed to do.

    you might not be around, but i know you could see me, still wanting to be with you...

    If only you knew, the love that grew for you. I still love you. even if the worst still lives, ill always think of you and your warm, sweet glow.

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    Re: Why?...

    Quote Originally Posted by MCRemogothgurl907 View Post
    u broke my heart, you left me to suffer, but i still forgave you.
    those tears i cried were made by you,
    but im still a friend, im still helping you all the way through.
    your sweetness grew, i knew what i needed to do.



    [IMG]why[/IMG]
    A bit repetative, but it was effective somewhat. I despised the one time where you used "u" instead of the word "you." And, lowercase "i".... tsk tsk tsk.

    Overall it was okay, could have paid a bit more attention to structure a grammer.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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