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    Why did I do that?

    why did i lose
    all my control?
    why couldn't i just
    let it roll?

    Now I regret
    that big mistake
    for keeping my mouth shut
    in so many ways.

    how would you feel
    if you were mad at a friend
    who meant alot to you
    wouldn't you regret?

    i want to keep my mouth shut!!!!
    i close my eyes,
    and cry up all the tears
    i have left cold as ice.

    I wanna shut my mouth!!!!
    cry in a corner
    sometimes i just think,
    why can't i just say...........I'm sorry


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    For not keeping my mouth shut.
    I have ruined a friendship with a friend who meant dearly to me.
    I still love her though, she might not care.
    i still wrote this for her.
    She might not see this.
    but tears still hold inside of me.
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Post Re: Why did I do that?

    hmmm..... :/

    I like your idea here and how you wrote this poem, though it didn't rhyme I still liked it

    well whoever this person you're trying to say sorry to ...I hope he/she would read this because this is really nicely done or was it just a poem?

    ^_^

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    Re: Why did I do that?

    love the flow, hard hittin yet smooth. the ideas you tried to convey were rele good and it make me think about all the stupid stuff ive done over the years. nice poem, like ur style

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    Re: Why did I do that?

    veery good. u definitely have a talent for this, i hope to see more in the future..

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    Re: Why did I do that?

    thank you yes it was for a friend but now were friends again

    thank you all

    ♥~*The Princess*~♥
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