Why do i get these feelings?
A short introduction about my poem which is a true story on my myspace blog
"AHHHH!!!!!OMG i cant stop thinking about someone..
when i hear the word"love" i think of him when i usually thought of nothing, (unless you consider a heart something).
when i pass by him i smile, when he smiles back i blush.....uh oh...can it be...?
I can't believe it.
I SERIOUSLY don't think i can handle this.
I have homework, school and stuff to look forward to.
I have to hang out w/my friends, talk on the phone.
BUT I CANT HELP IT!!!!!!!
Hello, like duh!!
It's called LOVE"
Why do i get these feelings??
I'm on my way to first period
where you sit by me in class
*ring* the bell rang!
oh sh*t I forgot my pass!
The teacher of course sends me to the office
to get a tardy slip
then i just remembered
my love note was not hid!
And so then up to this very point
you could see it was not my day
"but that's not all of it", i thought
oh what did i just say!
I could not believe what was happening
i think i fell in love
the trap that gets my ups and downs
and that get boys saying i was sent from above.
My eyes got watery
i guess what you call tears.
and then i heard a deep voice
i couldn't believe my ears!
My love was talking to me,
asking if i was ok.
Then he took out my hand
what could i say?
Then he said no more
and grabbed me in his arms
he said, "I know how you feel, and i feel the same"
oh how i wanted to call my mom!
He wiped my tears, kissed my lips
wondering , "did i faint?"
when i got back to class
I thought i had gone insane.
My first love
oh how i dreamed
this moment from today
would remain the same for me!!
I know stupid, but i tried lol.
Re: Why do i get these feelings?
hmmm... This was a bit a rocky as far as the flow. And there were confusing parts... But I gotta say, I think this was one of your better works! I think you do well writing your honest feeling and thoughts. Like those first 2 stanzas... they were both clever, they set the scene for your story. They made me want to read more. It sounded more like YOUR WORDS, instead of a dolled up, romance novel. You should write like this more often.