awwwwww that is such a powerful poem. The subject of argument between two separate people and trying to fight for one to be heard and listened to. The never ending tug of war.
It was yet another great poem written by you. I liked how the second and fourth line of every stanza rhymed it was what was needed to give it that extra kick rather than having it all rhyme.
I really liked
It really worked well as the high point in the poem when it felt like the times were changing and you lost interest in trying to make the other person understand how you felt about them not listening to you.Why should I care
about what you have to say?
When you won't listen to what
I have to say on any given day.
Great work as always Atmoik