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    Why dont you go?

    There's no holding me back ,I'm
    not driven by fear I'm just driven
    by anger and your thoughts are under
    attack ,always being proven wrong
    from my point of view or even there's.

    Theres no holding me , i just let go
    of everything i love so i could be free
    to do what i feel and not what you want,
    things are going fine and there isnt a thing
    wrong.

    What is so hard to comprahend? , cant you
    see i am no longer caring for the things you
    say , i just shrug what you say off my back
    and keep going , if i cared for what you said
    i would be angry or sad but i feel nothing becuase
    i dont care for what you say or do.

    Cant you see im dead inside nothing
    you say or do will ever make it alright
    so let me go , cant you see i have had enough
    of you? things cant be set right by anything.

    Lastnight i smiled and said i loved you then
    we made love , HA that was just to get what
    i want ,cant you see that your nothing to me?
    i used you like i always did now run away , and let me
    be.

    Think of me how you want but im just
    going to keep using you till you leave
    so yeah i will keep telling you sweet nothings
    just so i can get what i want or till you get a brain
    and realise that your nothing to me , your just
    something to kill time with.

    Why do you stay when all i want is to hurt
    you , there nothing noble about what you do
    so go , i have somone else i need to be with
    cant you see that your not for me? why do you stay?
    ____________________________________________

    this poem depicts how some guys/girls are they keep
    giving hints or do things to show they dont love you
    but for some reason or another they are just to blind to
    see that love is the reason you stay and the only one they
    hurt is themsleves no matter how mean or cruel they act towards
    you.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Why dont you go?

    Hmm...truly is a good poem..and what u filled in really is true..some is like that
    it's sad to know the truth... :/ is this from actual experience? @.@ or..other's? @.@

    Hmmm exellent poem ~! love it~! ^^

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    Re: Why dont you go?

    no it isnt from personal experince but
    i have seen it enough times to say that
    some people just dont aprecaite what they
    have and abuse what is given because
    of there blind stupidity
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Why dont you go?

    Ooofta! Such a harsh yet greatly written poem! ^_^

    I love it. I couldn't pause from reading for a single second.
    It's one of my favs by you so far! Great work!


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    Re: Why dont you go?

    I agree holder, that people don't understand that it is love that makes you stay. But I don't agree that those people only hurt themselves. Afterall THEY DONT CARE (as you so wonderfully depicted here). The people who are loving someone who doesnt care... those are the people who hut the most. thats what I think anyway,
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    Re: Why dont you go?

    O.o WoW!!! Another great work from Chris... very nice... Teaches a lot...
    I hope I never get into a relationship with someone who thinks like that because I can say now already- I'd never leave, I'd wait and take it all untill he leaves me...
    I just can't leave- against my nature...
    I guess I should really watch out ^^
    See how much this made me think? Very nice!!!!
    Glad to see your writing again ^^

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    Re: Why dont you go?

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    I agree holder, that people don't understand that it is love that makes you stay. But I don't agree that those people only hurt themselves. Afterall THEY DONT CARE (as you so wonderfully depicted here). The people who are loving someone who doesnt care... those are the people who hut the most. thats what I think anyway,
    I agree with peach those of us who knowingly stay around those that don't actually love us just because we love them are the ones who get hurt the most. even if like in my case i know she doesn't love me but she keeps letting me think there is a chance and I just can't stop going to her when she wants because i love her. Even though she is getting an abortion with my child and I know this I still can't stop loving her and I am the one that keeps getting hurt here not her. I need to open my eyes and get the courage to just tell her to leave me alone. I wish i could but I don't think I will ever be able to love more than her and her alone even though she hurts me so much. When will I learn? but enough of this i'm getting off topic now.

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    Re: Why dont you go?

    Neh, this bunch of words made me angry.

    Life is so simple, no one gets it. And all the hurt you get in it you deserve somehow. It's my opinion that world takes itself way to seriously, just stop caring and things'll get easier.

    As for the poem, it has some nice imagery for me, but the grammar needs work as well as some minor spelling fixes.

    As far as I go, I don't like the poem. But it is good, I can't argue that.

    (Also... I feel those who hurt others to get what they want are terrid; they need a smack.)
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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