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    Why I Hate My Mother

    Why I hate My Mother

    In Ninety Eighty-eight
    Something dreadful took place
    It was a gloomy rainy day
    The cries of an infant were heard

    People rushed over to see what they heard
    Once they got there
    They couldn’t disbelieve what their eyes saw
    A baby in a pool of blood ruthlessly stabbed
    Next to the motionless body, a note was found

    The note was from the infant’s mother
    It read “I had to kill him, the father wouldn’t take care of either”
    People were in complete shock
    Many thought “how can a mother do such thing like that?”

    Since that ominous day during cloudy rainy days
    The cries of an infant are heard
    The mother you may ask?
    She got re-married and lives a good life

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    Re: Why I Hate My Mother

    How can be that ?Where the kind go ?
    really curel mother how she can do it ..
    that was very painful and aww hurting …
    how she live normally again ..They must shoot her ..

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Why I Hate My Mother

    This poem shows the realisation of perhaps what lengths a mother would do to if she was disparate enough to live a happy life. Showing that if she couldn't care for the child in the way that she could and resorted to the most possible lowest solution ever made. Its an act of Euthanasia for sure.

    I really did like the darkness and the portrayal of the harsh reality in this poem Ketaro. It really was well thought through although if could perhaps be a little longer. I felt the last couple of lines were a little rushed as you wanted to set it at 4 stanza's when it could have easily had more.
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    Re: Why I Hate My Mother

    Quote Originally Posted by Shippo101 View Post
    This was the most saddest poem i read. It was well written and had good feelings to it. Good Job Teddy
    Thanks Rowe. I wrote it at work, i didn't have anything better to do plus someone said something that hurt me a lot, so that kinda was the source of inspiration. ^^

    Quote Originally Posted by Sashacat View Post
    Now that is rather depressing. I expect better next time...
    I only write depressing poems. However, i used to write love poems and the such, but i grew tired of it. Thanks for your comment though, ^^

    Quote Originally Posted by xxoxx View Post
    How can be that ?Where the kind go ?
    really cruel mother how she can do it ..
    that was very painful and aww hurting …
    how she live normally again ..They must shoot her ..
    Yeah it is. Most infants that come to this miserable world are killed by their mothers because they are unwanted babies to begin with. Thanks for your comment. ^^

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