Thread: Why I Hate My Mother

How can be that ?Where the kind go ?
really curel mother how she can do it ..
that was very painful and aww hurting …
how she live normally again ..They must shoot her ..

This poem shows the realisation of perhaps what lengths a mother would do to if she was disparate enough to live a happy life. Showing that if she couldn't care for the child in the way that she could and resorted to the most possible lowest solution ever made. Its an act of Euthanasia for sure.

I really did like the darkness and the portrayal of the harsh reality in this poem Ketaro. It really was well thought through although if could perhaps be a little longer. I felt the last couple of lines were a little rushed as you wanted to set it at 4 stanza's when it could have easily had more.

Originally Posted by Shippo101

This was the most saddest poem i read. It was well written and had good feelings to it. Good Job Teddy

Thanks Rowe. I wrote it at work, i didn't have anything better to do plus someone said something that hurt me a lot, so that kinda was the source of inspiration. ^^

Originally Posted by Sashacat

Now that is rather depressing. I expect better next time...

I only write depressing poems. However, i used to write love poems and the such, but i grew tired of it. Thanks for your comment though, ^^

Originally Posted by xxoxx

How can be that ?Where the kind go ?
really cruel mother how she can do it ..
that was very painful and aww hurting …
how she live normally again ..They must shoot her ..

Yeah it is. Most infants that come to this miserable world are killed by their mothers because they are unwanted babies to begin with. Thanks for your comment. ^^