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    Why should I care what you think

    Love me or hate me
    Pick your choice
    I am what I am
    Take what you see
    Got a problem?
    You need to get it fixed
    Why should I change my ways for you?
    Forget what you said
    Listen to what I say
    I'm here to stay
    Flaws in all
    It's not my priority for you to accept me
    The decision is yours to do what you want so...
    Don't like me?
    so what

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    Re: Why should I care what you think

    good poem, but if you didnt care about what this individual thoguht of you, you wouldnt have amde a poem about it

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    Re: Why should I care what you think

    The sentiment comes across clearly.

    The structure needs work.

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    Re: Why should I care what you think

    feelings such feelings going on in a person's body, keep it up, your getting better and good

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    Re: Why should I care what you think

    better and better i swear this is a good poem jus' work on the structure
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    Re: Why should I care what you think

    Well the poem is nice expressed and defined...
    But if u dont care about what people think about u why write 1?



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    Re: Why should I care what you think

    If you wanna be honest.....i dont know why i wrote poem. i don't get bullied or anything. it was just a random idea, thats all. I'm glad you liked it anyway, and i'll try and do better.

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    Re: Why should I care what you think

    Quote Originally Posted by evil_neko_youkai View Post
    If you wanna be honest.....i dont know why i wrote poem. i don't get bullied or anything. it was just a random idea, thats all. I'm glad you liked it anyway, and i'll try and do better.
    well that random idea turned out to be a pretty good in my opinon. Good peom, needs a little work but its still cool.

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