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Reply With Quotegood poem, but if you didnt care about what this individual thoguht of you, you wouldnt have amde a poem about it
Love me or hate me
Pick your choice
I am what I am
Take what you see
Got a problem?
You need to get it fixed
Why should I change my ways for you?
Forget what you said
Listen to what I say
I'm here to stay
Flaws in all
It's not my priority for you to accept me
The decision is yours to do what you want so...
Don't like me?
so what
good poem, but if you didnt care about what this individual thoguht of you, you wouldnt have amde a poem about it
The sentiment comes across clearly.
The structure needs work.
feelings such feelings going on in a person's body, keep it up, your getting better and good
better and better i swear this is a good poem jus' work on the structure
Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon
Well the poem is nice expressed and defined...
But if u dont care about what people think about u why write 1?
perdoname michelle!
If you wanna be honest.....i dont know why i wrote poem. i don't get bullied or anything. it was just a random idea, thats all. I'm glad you liked it anyway, and i'll try and do better.
well that random idea turned out to be a pretty good in my opinon. Good peom, needs a little work but its still cool.Originally Posted by evil_neko_youkai
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