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Old Sep 29, 2007, 09:50 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Why is it so complicated

Times have changed , things are gone
with out reason , people forget and always
wonder ask why never looking for the answer
in front of them.

Things so simple are made so complicated
why cant there eyes be opened , a bomb goes
off hundreds hurt , and some are dead they ask
why when the answer is so obvious.

A baby cries people smile and think on a childhood
gone by and wonder why things are so innocent
yet so abused and neglected , reasons seem to elude
them when the answer is really simple.

Life is so short though we strive to live a hundred
years so we can see whats next never enjoying the
moments here and now , then its to late when they realise
all they ever waned to see was right there.

A spider web of lies and betrayal surround
a few people and when they get tangles up
in all the things they have done they wonder why
it went so wrong never thinking it was something
wrong they did trying to use another for a scape goat.


Things just seem to always be comlicated in a simple
world , lies are always madeto protect whats valuble
to only them , tears of regret to late to use they wonder
why there hated or avoided the answear is so simple but
to comlicated for them.
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this poem is about how some people never see the
simple truth because there lives are so comlicated frrom
all the hard work they do lie and betray the ones around them,
in the end no matter how well they are or how good thay
have it nothing will really make them that important or
even rememberd.

comments and suggestions are welcomed
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Old Sep 29, 2007, 10:07 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Why is it so complicated

Really nice poem with a really good message. I have a poem about this same problem that people persistently have. good write though, nicely done. =)
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Old Sep 29, 2007, 11:00 AM   #3 (permalink)
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agreed... ^^

good message... and again the descriptions~! love em ^^ keep up the good work..
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@__@ wOw, you right the most amazing poems...seriously you gotta start making a book
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