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    Why is it so complicated

    Times have changed , things are gone
    with out reason , people forget and always
    wonder ask why never looking for the answer
    in front of them.

    Things so simple are made so complicated
    why cant there eyes be opened , a bomb goes
    off hundreds hurt , and some are dead they ask
    why when the answer is so obvious.

    A baby cries people smile and think on a childhood
    gone by and wonder why things are so innocent
    yet so abused and neglected , reasons seem to elude
    them when the answer is really simple.

    Life is so short though we strive to live a hundred
    years so we can see whats next never enjoying the
    moments here and now , then its to late when they realise
    all they ever waned to see was right there.

    A spider web of lies and betrayal surround
    a few people and when they get tangles up
    in all the things they have done they wonder why
    it went so wrong never thinking it was something
    wrong they did trying to use another for a scape goat.


    Things just seem to always be comlicated in a simple
    world , lies are always madeto protect whats valuble
    to only them , tears of regret to late to use they wonder
    why there hated or avoided the answear is so simple but
    to comlicated for them.
    ___________________________________________

    this poem is about how some people never see the
    simple truth because there lives are so comlicated frrom
    all the hard work they do lie and betray the ones around them,
    in the end no matter how well they are or how good thay
    have it nothing will really make them that important or
    even rememberd.

    comments and suggestions are welcomed
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Why is it so complicated

    Really nice poem with a really good message. I have a poem about this same problem that people persistently have. good write though, nicely done. =)
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    Re: Why is it so complicated

    agreed... ^^

    good message... and again the descriptions~! love em ^^ keep up the good work..

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    Re: Why is it so complicated

    @__@ wOw, you right the most amazing poems...seriously you gotta start making a book

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