Sashacat

What could I do
You said that no one ever said their feelings
Well I took that chance
Whispering those words to you
It seems it wasn't enough
My feelings held out
You slapped the heart back into my throat
It broke the most protected thing
Within a strong unbroken cage
My heart crumbled in two
Now all I can do is watch you walk away
Do you understand why no one says their feelings
Sometimes those feelings aren't good enough
But you asked why no one told their feelings
Your actions are now your answer
I'm sorry for loving you my friend

Meji Imaru

....Its beautiful....I can relate to the poem, unfortunatly, but I loved it keep it up^^

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ketaro

wow that poem was really kool, nice poem sashacat.

sora the king of dreams

hmmmmm I think it was really good keep it up

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I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

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Mr. K

Talk about reality! Very intune, and deep. I like it.

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xxoxx

I feel alone;
Lost not found.
All is quiet;
Not one sound.
All so stressed;
Not relaxed.
Just for once,
Let it be.
That he's the one that's meant for me.
Let him see,
Being alone is just not me.
I just want him to have to hold.
A little comfort goes so far.
Let him stay forever in my arms.
Every day the sun goes to set;
Leaving darkness all to rest.
I wish the sun to return real quick;
So I don't have to be left amiss.
One day the man will come.
And till that day I'll be without the sun;
Filled with coldness from the dark.
Even then will I not trust?
Not knowing what's meant to be.
What is love that strays away from me;
A four letter word that everyone has to say.
How do you know when they mean it true?
When is the day that someone will prove;
Prove to me his love is true.
you know thats what i feel....but nice and very deep....good job...

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JefferyXie

Deep..emotional and it honest.I like the title because straight away it has the ability to question to the reader whether they should be more open with their feelings or not to make some improvement in relationships.