Wind will blow,
Snow will melt.
Flowers will bloom,
Tides will shift.
But that will not keep my eyes off you.
The weather will change,
Clouds will fade.
Time will pass,
Creatures will age.
But that will not keep me away from you.
The sun will rise,
The moon will phase.
Seasons will pass,
Youth will die.
But that will not keep me from loving you.
Wow, this really shows the emotion one can have for another. It was touching and enjoyed reading it.
Aw, I like it! Simple, but at the same time it says everything it needs to, to explain what some feel is a rather complicated emotion. Love.
Very nice. It's like talking about all the obstacles in life yet they won't stop you.
What a sweet poem ^^ Full of love... I like it very much... ^^ Short, but... well the words are so strong that it needs not to be longer ^^
Very nice work with this love poem ^^