+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 5 of 5

Thread: Will

  1. #1
    Otaku Seirika is off to a good start
    Join Date
    Jul 2007
    Location
    Somewhere over the RAINBOW
    Posts
    148
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Will

    Wind will blow,
    Snow will melt.
    Flowers will bloom,
    Tides will shift.
    But that will not keep my eyes off you.
    The weather will change,
    Clouds will fade.
    Time will pass,
    Creatures will age.
    But that will not keep me away from you.
    The sun will rise,
    The moon will phase.
    Seasons will pass,
    Youth will die.
    But that will not keep me from loving you.

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

  2. #2
    Otaku ILikeApples5520 is off to a good start ILikeApples5520's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2007
    Location
    Bergen County, NJ
    Posts
    299
    Thanks
    8
    Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts

    Re: Will

    Wow, this really shows the emotion one can have for another. It was touching and enjoyed reading it.


    Thanks to _gwenibe_ for this awesome sig!

  3. #3
    Femmebot Rehab Colt Crouse Champion, Bookworm Champion, Hangman Champion, Connect 2 Champion Peach_follows has become well known Peach_follows has become well known Peach_follows has become well known Peach_follows's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2005
    Location
    Friendly Fridley
    Posts
    1,477
    Thanks
    124
    Thanked 140 Times in 121 Posts

    Re: Will

    Aw, I like it! Simple, but at the same time it says everything it needs to, to explain what some feel is a rather complicated emotion. Love.
    ... Not Ever Again...

  4. #4
    Otaku Chaos105 may be famous one day Chaos105 may be famous one day Chaos105's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2006
    Location
    Unknown
    Posts
    101
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Will

    Very nice. It's like talking about all the obstacles in life yet they won't stop you.

    They say, "I will die for my country." I never hear them say, "I will kill for my country."

  5. #5
    Angelic Lasura may be famous one day Lasura's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2007
    Location
    In a Demon's Arms
    Posts
    1,875
    Thanks
    56
    Thanked 39 Times in 36 Posts

    Re: Will

    What a sweet poem ^^ Full of love... I like it very much... ^^ Short, but... well the words are so strong that it needs not to be longer ^^

    Very nice work with this love poem ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

+ Reply to Thread

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts