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    Will-O-Wisp

    In a mad rush to the dock I see no one I know.

    Old women wave politely as I stumble down the
    street.

    The scuff of my shoes across the pavement is
    lost to the pounding in my ears.

    The general store in front of me rises
    to the sky, the world grows dark.

    Chocolate orbs scan the room,
    the familiar sound of the train comes into focus.

    My breath returns to my lungs as light
    filters in through the blinds.

    A raindrop hits my nose as my face rises to
    the ceiling the rain begins to pour.

    The floor disappears and she begins talking to
    me.

    Her black curls fall down upon her tiny shoulders.
    her red party shoes are shined to sparkle, and
    her pale lips whisper to me.

    Everything goes to fog, the headlights blare
    through and the siren screams.

    My eyes find their way open and my bedroom
    comes in through the dark to welcome me.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Will-O-Wisp

    wha? what was this about? In all of its confusion, I like the poem. I just dont know what it was about. With every stanza I felt like I was reading different beginings to different poems. Although.... everything seemed have such wickedly awesome imagery that I can't complain.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Will-O-Wisp

    It was about a dream I had. I was trying to pull of the feeling of confusion because that's pretty much what I felt when I woke up. But yeah there is no great meaning behind it or anything...just a simple dream ^-^
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Will-O-Wisp

    i love the poem...but i dont get it, but anwayz it was awesome keep it up!!=)

    IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU.
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