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    WIndmill...

    Windmill, windmill
    spinning fair

    Windmill, windmill
    our cupboards bare

    Windmill, windmill
    please do share

    Windmill, windmill
    don’t you care

    Windmill, windmill
    our stomachs filled, an event so rare

    Windmill, windmill
    our bodies do wear

    Windmill, windmill
    the people, they stare

    Windmill…

    Well... I was looking at the poem contest thing and realized after I had finished making the poem it was over... I still wrote it.. so why not share it with the world...
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: WIndmill...

    very cool poem i like the the way you used the wind meal descirbing how it kept
    food on the table ,in some parts of the world this method is still used i think.
    i think your poem was cool with how you made use of as a way of living,atleast
    that what i got from this
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: WIndmill...

    It's a cute poem FlawEdMind...repeating is such a creative style of yours. ^_^

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    Re: WIndmill...

    mmm
    this poem is really alike to the song of gurillas
    just made some changes and boom
    its still good though.



    perdoname michelle!

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