Winds of change!

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Sep 17, 2006, 02:18 AM

My thoughts they are of pain
and how life can be so crule
no matter how you try, life
seem's to keep you down.

The winds of change are comming
i can feel it in my bone's there's
nothing i can do but ,relax and take
the pill of change,oh how it make's me feel.

The numbness of my heart make this
like seem dull with death around the
corner how can we win at all ,hear
the mighty roar of change because it
will affect you too.

All i can do is watch as life wither's like
a dieing rose,there's nothing you can do
but replace the old with the new,how cruel
the wind's of change are never staying still.

How i wish life's wind's would avoid me
forever more,nothing can be done once
the change begins ,if only time would
stop the wind's of change would be no more.

How i love my life today the winds of change
are here what a funny thing to say when all
life does is fade.

this poem is for how life goes through changes
and how some wish the winds of chnage would
stop but in reality oh we can do is just wait and
watch everything around us grow and die.

Heartless_mage · Sep 17, 2006, 02:44 AM

great poem...................makes you really think about how we as humans take life for granted......................

BlueFox1 · Sep 17, 2006, 04:11 AM

Awesome Poem Bro! It really makes you take life on in a totally different light! Just like Heartless_Mage said it make you think on how take life for granted sometimes!

Awesome 5 out of 5 form me!

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Sep 17, 2006, 06:14 AM

thanks i am glad you both liked this and yea it does ,i see life changeing alot around me and theres nothing i can do but watch so thought i express
my feeelings about it in a poem. sort of show how i seee the winds of
change, and i am glad you liked blue bro means alot coming from you

Sincere · Sep 17, 2006, 06:36 AM

How true, how very true that is. Very very nice job on this one. I can relate so much it's scary, lol. This poem was something more people than know it relate to, but man, it's just unfair how often it affects me. Anyway, I thought the poem was well written and it kinda rhymes at parts if you read it right. Very very great poem!

CherryBlossom18 · Sep 17, 2006, 01:34 PM

I really liked your poem. It makes you think how you can sometimes take things for granted and how you feel once you lose something or someone you thought you'd be able to hold on to forever. Great job and I look forward to seeing more of your poems.

HieisLove · Sep 17, 2006, 06:15 PM

I love it! Its beautiful! 10!

Shinigami's_Angel · Sep 18, 2006, 09:55 PM

Wow!

Awesome as always big bro!

Your poem really speaks 2 me.I loved it!

It really does show that you can never stop the changes that are happening even though you wish that you could sometimes.But awesome poem big bro!

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Sep 18, 2006, 09:58 PM

thanks sis i am glad you liked it and your right yo cant really do anything
but watch,and thats sort sad but life has a purpose and i dont think we should change it anyway

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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,795 Thanks: 21 Thanked 20 Times in 19 Posts Credits: 3,212	Winds of change! My thoughts they are of pain and how life can be so crule no matter how you try, life seem's to keep you down. The winds of change are comming i can feel it in my bone's there's nothing i can do but ,relax and take the pill of change,oh how it make's me feel. The numbness of my heart make this like seem dull with death around the corner how can we win at all ,hear the mighty roar of change because it will affect you too. All i can do is watch as life wither's like a dieing rose,there's nothing you can do but replace the old with the new,how cruel the wind's of change are never staying still. How i wish life's wind's would avoid me forever more,nothing can be done once the change begins ,if only time would stop the wind's of change would be no more. How i love my life today the winds of change are here what a funny thing to say when all life does is fade. this poem is for how life goes through changes and how some wish the winds of chnage would stop but in reality oh we can do is just wait and watch everything around us grow and die. __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/ Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Sep 17, 2006 at 04:31 AM.
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,795 Thanks: 21 Thanked 20 Times in 19 Posts Credits: 3,212	Re: Winds of change! thanks i am glad you both liked this and yea it does ,i see life changeing alot around me and theres nothing i can do but watch so thought i express my feeelings about it in a poem. sort of show how i seee the winds of change, and i am glad you liked blue bro means alot coming from you __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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Sincere Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Justin's heart Posts: 307 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 364	Re: Winds of change! How true, how very true that is. Very very nice job on this one. I can relate so much it's scary, lol. This poem was something more people than know it relate to, but man, it's just unfair how often it affects me. Anyway, I thought the poem was well written and it kinda rhymes at parts if you read it right. Very very great poem! __________________ $C:\Documents and Settings\Julia\My Documents\My Pictures\Siggy.jpg$ A white rose no longer alone I know who's heart it is to represent I didn't pick it, but i let it grow For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,795 Thanks: 21 Thanked 20 Times in 19 Posts Credits: 3,212	Re: Winds of change! thanks sis i am glad you liked it and your right yo cant really do anything but watch,and thats sort sad but life has a purpose and i dont think we should change it anyway __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/ Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Sep 19, 2006 at 05:33 AM.
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