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    Winds of change!

    My thoughts they are of pain
    and how life can be so crule
    no matter how you try, life
    seem's to keep you down.

    The winds of change are comming
    i can feel it in my bone's there's
    nothing i can do but ,relax and take
    the pill of change,oh how it make's me feel.

    The numbness of my heart make this
    like seem dull with death around the
    corner how can we win at all ,hear
    the mighty roar of change because it
    will affect you too.

    All i can do is watch as life wither's like
    a dieing rose,there's nothing you can do
    but replace the old with the new,how cruel
    the wind's of change are never staying still.

    How i wish life's wind's would avoid me
    forever more,nothing can be done once
    the change begins ,if only time would
    stop the wind's of change would be no more.

    How i love my life today the winds of change
    are here what a funny thing to say when all
    life does is fade.


    this poem is for how life goes through changes
    and how some wish the winds of chnage would
    stop but in reality oh we can do is just wait and
    watch everything around us grow and die.
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    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Winds of change!

    great poem...................makes you really think about how we as humans take life for granted......................

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    Re: Winds of change!

    Awesome Poem Bro! It really makes you take life on in a totally different light! Just like Heartless_Mage said it make you think on how take life for granted sometimes!

    Awesome 5 out of 5 form me!

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    Re: Winds of change!

    thanks i am glad you both liked this and yea it does ,i see life changeing alot around me and theres nothing i can do but watch so thought i express
    my feeelings about it in a poem. sort of show how i seee the winds of
    change, and i am glad you liked blue bro means alot coming from you
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Winds of change!

    How true, how very true that is. Very very nice job on this one. I can relate so much it's scary, lol. This poem was something more people than know it relate to, but man, it's just unfair how often it affects me. Anyway, I thought the poem was well written and it kinda rhymes at parts if you read it right. Very very great poem!
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    Re: Winds of change!

    I really liked your poem. It makes you think how you can sometimes take things for granted and how you feel once you lose something or someone you thought you'd be able to hold on to forever. Great job and I look forward to seeing more of your poems.

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    I love it! Its beautiful! 10!
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    Re: Winds of change!

    Wow! Awesome as always big bro! Your poem really speaks 2 me.I loved it! It really does show that you can never stop the changes that are happening even though you wish that you could sometimes.But awesome poem big bro!
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