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Reply With Quotegreat poem...................makes you really think about how we as humans take life for granted......................
My thoughts they are of pain
and how life can be so crule
no matter how you try, life
seem's to keep you down.
The winds of change are comming
i can feel it in my bone's there's
nothing i can do but ,relax and take
the pill of change,oh how it make's me feel.
The numbness of my heart make this
like seem dull with death around the
corner how can we win at all ,hear
the mighty roar of change because it
will affect you too.
All i can do is watch as life wither's like
a dieing rose,there's nothing you can do
but replace the old with the new,how cruel
the wind's of change are never staying still.
How i wish life's wind's would avoid me
forever more,nothing can be done once
the change begins ,if only time would
stop the wind's of change would be no more.
How i love my life today the winds of change
are here what a funny thing to say when all
life does is fade.
this poem is for how life goes through changes
and how some wish the winds of chnage would
stop but in reality oh we can do is just wait and
watch everything around us grow and die.
Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Sep 17, 2006 at 04:31 AM.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
great poem...................makes you really think about how we as humans take life for granted......................
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Awesome Poem Bro! It really makes you take life on in a totally different light! Just like Heartless_Mage said it make you think on how take life for granted sometimes!
Awesome 5 out of 5 form me!
thanks i am glad you both liked this and yea it does ,i see life changeing alot around me and theres nothing i can do but watch so thought i express
my feeelings about it in a poem. sort of show how i seee the winds of
change, and i am glad you liked blue bro means alot coming from you
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
How true, how very true that is. Very very nice job on this one. I can relate so much it's scary, lol. This poem was something more people than know it relate to, but man, it's just unfair how often it affects me. Anyway, I thought the poem was well written and it kinda rhymes at parts if you read it right. Very very great poem!
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
I really liked your poem. It makes you think how you can sometimes take things for granted and how you feel once you lose something or someone you thought you'd be able to hold on to forever. Great job and I look forward to seeing more of your poems.
I love it! Its beautiful! 10!
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Wow!Awesome as always big bro!
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