Through my battles
I have gained these wings
Through my triumphs
I have gained this strength
Alone I achieve
Alone I walk
Alone I've become as hard as rock
I can go where I please
Beneath the open sky
But with these wings
I can never fly
That's my first AO poem
Please tell me what you thought of it.
very good words used in your poem alot of energy into the poem makes me want to see more great job very nice indeed♥~*The Princess*~♥
I thought for a moment that this would be a poll on chicken wings, but I was pleasantly surprised by this poem. Reminds me of how I feel about things. Alone I achieve, Alone I walk, Alone I've become hard as rock.......I'll keep that part of the poem in my memory for a long time.
I was surprised by a few things in this poem... one was that it appears all the words are spelled properly... and two... there was no slang in it... now... aside from being surprised... I loved this... very short... it conveys it's point in a few lines so I don't spend ten minutes reading it... and it appeared to me that it had a darker tone in it... which made it better... it has the sound of happiness caused from acheivement combined with that dark, lonely feeling of breaking your back, along with shedding blood and tears to get to that point... in short... this was a very well thought out poem... good job...
i thought it was alright as far as i know
everything was spelled right which is
rare to come by but as far as poem
wise i thought it was ok event though
im not that big of a fan for unryhming