very interesting. I like it congrates on a cool poem
Wings:
Sometimes I wish for,
Wings of my own,
Great white wings,
That shines throught the heavens like a light through the darkness,
I wish to fly away and see the world for what it has to offer,
This is my one and only wish for the world after this one,
Whatever awaits me on the other side of that great door,
I hope it's the wings that I have been searching for.
Last edited by viper11025; Apr 05, 2006 at 07:29 PM.
very interesting. I like it congrates on a cool poem
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Nice, it's offbeat, and even though you attempted to rhyme(which by all means i am against rhyming poetry-unless its by accident) it flows nice. I like it.
I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
Rhyme poetry if way to over done so I changed it up a bit.
Nice... I like the whole message ur tryin to send. It has a very good flow to it.
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Good poem. Try to make more
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