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    Post " Wings " Dedication to A:S

    Wings:

    Sometimes I wish for,
    Wings of my own,
    Great white wings,
    That shines throught the heavens like a light through the darkness,
    I wish to fly away and see the world for what it has to offer,
    This is my one and only wish for the world after this one,
    Whatever awaits me on the other side of that great door,
    I hope it's the wings that I have been searching for.
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    Re: " Wings " Dedication to A:S

    very interesting. I like it congrates on a cool poem

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    Re: " Wings " Dedication to A:S

    Nice, it's offbeat, and even though you attempted to rhyme(which by all means i am against rhyming poetry-unless its by accident) it flows nice. I like it.

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    Re: " Wings " Dedication to A:S

    Rhyme poetry if way to over done so I changed it up a bit.

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    Re: " Wings " Dedication to A:S

    *bravo* *bravo* I do like this. Very high up.
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    Re: " Wings " Dedication to A:S

    Nice... I like the whole message ur tryin to send. It has a very good flow to it.
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    Re: " Wings " Dedication to A:S

    Thnx for the comment.
    Hope you enjoyed them all.

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    Re: " Wings " Dedication to A:S

    Good poem. Try to make more

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