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    Re: Wings of Elegance

    That was a really romantic poem. It told a story of wanting someone so much you feel like you're out of their league eventhough they want you the same. Good job and I look forward to reading your next one.
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    Re: Wings of Elegance

    mmm thank you.. Though I have written more... all love poems but nothing like this one.
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    My lover speaks; and he says, 'Arise my beloved my beautiful one and come!' -Song of Songs 2:10

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    Re: Wings of Elegance

    The story in this poem is beautiful... giving up something you love for.. someone. I hope to read more by you. This was very well done.
    ..And I honestly enjoyed it, I think it's one of the best poems I've read today.

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    Re: Wings of Elegance

    thank you.. this feels good to hear that.. I showed a few of my friends and they almost cried.. this is about a particular someone... and I write him poems often.. so if you like this one you may like the rest!
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    My lover speaks; and he says, 'Arise my beloved my beautiful one and come!' -Song of Songs 2:10

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    Re: Wings of Elegance

    A romantic yet sad poem where love was sacrifice.... But in this situation it's unavoidable...Great Poem i must agree~

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