Wow Gren! I love it!
It's so nice. It has an eerie feeling all throughout it. It's short, and has such a deep feeling. Winter, your love.
I enjoyed it very much! Keep it up, gren.
Winter
cut close, cut cold
this chill cuts the flesh
and saws down through the bone.
run deep, run red
this blood runs through the vein
and freezes thick in the heart.
fall hard, fall far
this snow falls on the lips
and blisters the delicate skin.
My love, my winter, will last forever.
Wow Gren! I love it!
It's so nice. It has an eerie feeling all throughout it. It's short, and has such a deep feeling. Winter, your love.
I enjoyed it very much! Keep it up, gren.
nyahehehe, cool man! so cold but warm eh?
short, direct to the point..
what aboout summer? hehehe jk jk
If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
I don't mind and you don't matter
I had a few lines from this bouncing around in my head for a couple of days, and I finally got around to writing it down.
I'm toying with a new style here (new for me, anyway); I tried it once before in a poem I wrote for a class, and I really liked the end result. Maybe I'll post that one sometime, I think it was the best piece I've ever written.
Yes I agree, the style was very interesting! I love how you made it short and sweet. One of favsGreat job!
Well, keep on doing whatever you're doing. At first, I didnt like the wording. But as I continued to read? It grew on me. Awesome job at creating the tone.
Seduced by Flesh
yeah .. agree with kasai...
i like it very much...
really short and straight to the point..
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Thanks, all. It's always encouraging to get positive feedback. I used to write regularly, but somehow got out of the habit. Picking it up again makes me realize how much I enjoy it.
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