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    Winter day's

    Seem's like only yesterday I cried,
    but you were always there by my side,
    Now you gone with the rain,
    left me dealin with the pain,
    Korupt my world with your lies,
    trade my soul and help it die,
    After all you but me threw,
    i swore i'd always hate you,
    You left me lying on the ground,
    did'nt make a single sound,
    But i still want you, coz i still need you,
    I have to see your eye's, starin back in mine,
    Wrap your arms around me, touch and caress my body,
    Want a sinlge moment, just to say i miss you,
    Now when you said you loved me, was it the truth or simple lie's.

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    Re: Winter day's

    Wooow!! Truly, that was awsome! Great poem! Really, i liked it alot n_n, mostly because, i dont know, i find it more... meaningful than alot others that i've read. So way to go!!!

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    Re: Winter day's

    its a beautiful poem, it shows how in so much pain and hate one still finds love. most of the pain is self inflicted and one dont know until it is to late.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    thnx guys XD, its makes me feel better knowing that

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