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Reply With QuoteVery sweet. Don't focus so much on rhyming. Sometimes metre is more important. But sweet, very sweet.
I begin to bloom with the daisy
Welling up with emotion daily,
How far I am going grow,
With the seasons, in the snow.
As my heart shoots out to the sky
I long to take up root and fly
Just a bud during winter,
A flower comes from a cinder.
Having a heart is for those who know
That emotions tend to grow
Out of love that springs from within
Until a lawnmower kills your next of kin.
Very sweet. Don't focus so much on rhyming. Sometimes metre is more important. But sweet, very sweet.
Lol. I thought hte rhyme was executed wonderfully. And I love the ending.
Seduced by Flesh
It was a very sweet poem. I liked the beggining. Good work and I look forward to reading your next one.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
It's a very cute poem.
It flowed well and told a bit of story.
I enjoyed reading... very well done.
It's brilliant~ and it tells a life story~ I like it nice and simple~
Very impressive.Good rhyme,poem flows well and nice choice of words.
First of all... I love the ending. It made me laugh. The whole poem was good though, and I re-read it again because I liked it so much.Good job... Can't wait to read the next one.
Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.
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