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    Re: Winter Flower

    The poem flowed smoothly and the rhyming does not hinder the reader for understanding the whole poem. Imagery was really good too. keep up the good work

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    Re: Winter Flower

    I agree with raja on this one the overall poem is wonderful! Keep up the excellent work!

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    Re: Winter Flower

    Very nice! It a well put together poem. I especially like the use of the lawnmower. ^_^


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    Re: Winter Flower

    OMG i LOVE ISH it sooooo sweet It sooo cool.
    I hope to read more of your awsome works of lit.

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