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    Winter's Warmth

    >.> So it's a new style I'm trying, the lines might not all be right.. hey I tried..Sorry i had to use the ~~~~~ .. i can't space in front = =

    Winter’s Warmth

    Little boy, I see you walking alone
    ~ Holding to nothing, starving in the streets
    In front of a building made for a king
    ~ You watch them silently as the rich eat
    A lighted cantle and box of matches
    ~ Flickering endlessly till dusk dawns
    You lie on the stony, hard pavement
    ~ Till you wake up again in the morn

    A new day begins today
    ~ Got chased for sleeping by the door
    Snow slowly falling from above
    ~ Making you shiver even more
    You pass by a shabby looking house
    ~ Taking a swift and silent peep inside
    No one’s in, you though to yourself
    ~ You feel your fear slowly subside

    Half a step you took
    ~ When you stop dead in your tracks
    A mum and her young ones
    ~ They all looked like a wreck
    Preparing to turn and leave
    ~ When you see them smiling wide
    Hands outstretched with a bowl of food
    ~ Almost immediately, you were by their side

    A small fire burning in the middle
    ~ Symbolizing a shred of hope for all
    These people and this lonesome place
    ~ Home- yes, that’s what you’ll call
    Neither rich nor very well fed
    ~ Yet they all looked so happy
    In the arms of people your love
    ~ Perhaps that’s the meaning of family

    Six years has gone passed
    ~ A little boy no more
    Knowing they’re not here forever
    ~ At the thought your heart sore
    Every time as winter arrives
    ~ You were reminded of that day
    After all there’s where it all started
    ~ And that’s what they all say

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    Re: Winter's Warmth

    beautiful ^_^

    I love it not only a poem but a story for me to get lost in ^^


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    Re: Winter's Warmth

    Is this the poem you were working on?

    I have to say I like it, a bite "Cold" and "Warmth" to it.

    o.o Some of it I could see coming before it was written, others I was lost in the words.

    But it still is great poem elie, and any style you can master!
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    Re: Winter's Warmth

    That was really touching. You really poured your heart out and it shows. You have a very creative mind. I was instantly drawn to what you wrote. I loved it.

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Winter's Warmth

    That was really touching. You really poured your heart out and it shows. You have a very creative mind. I was instantly drawn to what you wrote. I loved it.
    Thx ^^ I wanted to make a story out of it see. Thanks for the support guys

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