I love it not only a poem but a story for me to get lost in ^^
>.> So it's a new style I'm trying, the lines might not all be right.. hey I tried..Sorry i had to use the ~~~~~ .. i can't space in front = =
Little boy, I see you walking alone
~ Holding to nothing, starving in the streets
In front of a building made for a king
~ You watch them silently as the rich eat
A lighted cantle and box of matches
~ Flickering endlessly till dusk dawns
You lie on the stony, hard pavement
~ Till you wake up again in the morn
A new day begins today
~ Got chased for sleeping by the door
Snow slowly falling from above
~ Making you shiver even more
You pass by a shabby looking house
~ Taking a swift and silent peep inside
No one’s in, you though to yourself
~ You feel your fear slowly subside
Half a step you took
~ When you stop dead in your tracks
A mum and her young ones
~ They all looked like a wreck
Preparing to turn and leave
~ When you see them smiling wide
Hands outstretched with a bowl of food
~ Almost immediately, you were by their side
A small fire burning in the middle
~ Symbolizing a shred of hope for all
These people and this lonesome place
~ Home- yes, that’s what you’ll call
Neither rich nor very well fed
~ Yet they all looked so happy
In the arms of people your love
~ Perhaps that’s the meaning of family
Six years has gone passed
~ A little boy no more
Knowing they’re not here forever
~ At the thought your heart sore
Every time as winter arrives
~ You were reminded of that day
After all there’s where it all started
~ And that’s what they all say
Is this the poem you were working on?
I have to say I like it, a bite "Cold" and "Warmth" to it.
o.o Some of it I could see coming before it was written, others I was lost in the words.
But it still is great poem elie, and any style you can master!
That was really touching. You really poured your heart out and it shows. You have a very creative mind. I was instantly drawn to what you wrote. I loved it.
Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.
Thx ^^ I wanted to make a story out of it see. Thanks for the support guysThat was really touching. You really poured your heart out and it shows. You have a very creative mind. I was instantly drawn to what you wrote. I loved it.