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    Wipe My Tears Away

    When the only thing I wanna do is cry,
    The only thing I turn to is you.

    Like droplets of rain, my tears are.

    But when you, the sun, shines through the dark clouds,
    My tears all go away, and my heart feels warm.

    You are my only hope, my last chance.

    So WHY? Why go on in this hopeless dream?
    Because, I think there may be something for us.

    So PLEASE! Please dont go away
    And turn my dream to nothing but gray.

    I think I know exactly what to say.
    You've stolen my heart, and the only thing left is clay.

    But now, my heart is broken.
    Because my love has been stolen.

    I want you to know, that I will stop searching.
    Because if I keep on searching, I will never stop hurting.

    I think I'll stop alltogether
    Because I want to be with you forever.

    So when you think of me next, remember me at my best.

    I love you so badly,
    But unfortunately I'll die so sadly...

    ...Knowing that you dont love me like I do...

    So please come back, wipe my tears away.
    Wash away the pain and sorrow that's in my heart.

    So that we may be happy together,
    Locked in eachother's arms forever.

    Now, dont cry! Hold your arms way up high!

    I know... It's just a hopeless dream.
    But what does that matter?

    ...All I've done is make us both sadder...

    So, now, I'll leave you to contemplate.
    Contemplate the true meaning of fate...


    Meow. :3

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    Re: Wipe My Tears Away

    this one is nice ly done and unconventional too.

    I know... It's just a hopeless dream.
    But what does that matter?

    ...All I've done is make us both sadder...

    So, now, I'll leave you to contemplate.
    Contemplate the true meaning of fate...
    sometimes or more often this is easier said than done.. i am touched maybe because i am in a similar situation but sometimes it's just so hard to stay away and this is what this feels . it's like saying i love so much but the complications will hurt us both so i ahve to stay away.
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    Re: Wipe My Tears Away

    wow thats really good i like it alot cuz i can feel the sadness and wanting in this poem and its like a rush

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    Re: Wipe My Tears Away

    Quote Originally Posted by jazzy9513 View Post
    wow thats really good i like it alot cuz i can feel the sadness and wanting in this poem and its like a rush
    Yes, your right. I wrote this for someone I love. But she doesnt care for me. Everything in this poem is true.


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