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    Re: Wish I wasn't here...

    damn it sprout i should stop reading your poems lol

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    Re: Wish I wasn't here...

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    Wishing I wasn't here
    because you are not around.
    Hoping you'll return to me
    and pick me up off the ground.

    Upset because my time is up
    and I have nothing left.
    Happy that you are trying
    hard not to be upset.

    Loving you everyday,
    because you've given me so much.
    Hating him all the time.
    Simply put, backstabbers suck.

    In denail about my situation,
    wishing it was not real.
    Knowing that the walls I build
    will only hide what I feel.

    Pretending that it doesn't
    matter, so people will never know.
    Acting like I'm in a good mood,
    yet wishing they'd cancel this "show".

    Unsure of what the future holds
    or what it may possibly bring.
    Quite certain that you're still
    the one I want to give "the ring".

    Wishing that I wasn't here,
    for my future is so unclear.

    Wishing that I wasn't in
    this spot, why isn't HE standing here??


    Man you rocks!! Its good one!! Hope you could make me one How many days does it take you to do this poem? I really love it!! One more question... Are you the only one who make this poem or you ask for help? Well if you wanna make it private,no problem! PM me... Or if you dont wanna answer it... Thanks
    SHIT MAH' MEN!!

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    Re: Wish I wasn't here...

    Quote Originally Posted by Alondra View Post
    damn it sprout i should stop reading your poems lol
    No, you should read more of my poetry, LOL. I find that reading about other people's experiences often helps me out with my own. Thanks for readin', LaLa!!

    Quote Originally Posted by Uujille View Post
    Man you rocks!! Its good one!! Hope you could make me one How many days does it take you to do this poem? I really love it!! One more question... Are you the only one who make this poem or you ask for help? Well if you wanna make it private,no problem! PM me... Or if you dont wanna answer it... Thanks
    Why thank you for thinking I rock, Uujille! ^_^ I'm glad you like my work. To answer your questions: It takes me about anywhere between five to thirty minutes to write a poem. Sometimes it'll take about a half of a day, but that's when I'm facing writers block. I do all of my work on my own and I never ask for help, because otherwise, it's not my own piece of art. I could write something up for ya, but I have some requests first--which we could discuss via PM.

    Once again, thanks to both of you for taking the time to read my work and I hope you will enjoy my future works. ^_^


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