When i was little
i thought a star
would bring joy and happiness
but i think i went to far.
I still wonder
about the wish I made
did it ever come true
or did it just fade.
See I still wish on star
hoping about
if dream will come true
without a doubt.
Holiday season came
presents everywhere.
I wonder if I see mine
but where...........
W
I
S
H
On
A
STAR
Yeah, Bye.
That was a rather good poem although I did feel it lacked something. Is it ok if make a suggestion?
Rather than having the words per line at the end, turn this poem into an Acrostic poem where each letter of the first line spells out Wish on a star. Of course you don't have to alter the number of rows in the stanza. Look at the one I created it might help you understand.Always
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Thank you very much sazzy. I try to do my best with poems but i know im not good but thanks though^^
Yeah, Bye.
I didn't mean my comment to put you down, just wanted to see what you thought of the idea. Its still a great poem
You may think that you are not good at writing poems but you are. The fact you still write them shows your creative side and that is a good thing
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oh...THANK YOU^-^. it means alot and i appreciate your thoughts and your suggestions about it. thank you. i will try to make one like that as soon as i can think of one lol.
Yeah, Bye.
aww it was a sweet poem^^ maybe next time make it longer? but u did a great job!
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ok well thank you though^^ thanks everyone ^-^
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