Wish you were here one more time!

Things seem so hard and it seems like nothing is going right
i have tried a one hundred times and one hundred times i failed
nothing seems to make things feel right. I have been through
so many face's and seen so many face's but my heart just seems
so dead since your gone.


Every time a i sit and think of the times we had i get those feeling's
that i had when we were once so close but now its just the ghost i
chase wishing things could have gone better than they did. Another
minute could have saved us but i chose to walk away because i love you
and i cant stand the hurt i put you through.


Places i go i see images of your face and it makes me think of how
the times we had were so damn crazy, those long nights if staying up
laughing at nothing , the times we cried over things that seemed unimportant
to others we were of a kind.I am here now without you but i still feel you here every time i close my eyes.

It's ok Holder... You can open your eyes... You don't have to miss me anymore. I'm back! See? ............................ This poem IS about ME right? lol

Really though, touching piece. Anyone who has ever had to feel the pain of someones absence in their life, could definitely relate to this. You're such a passionate writer, you need no practice when it comes to relaying emotion, But maybe taking more time with your grammar would benefit your writing.

thanks and your right my grammar is a bit off its how i talk in general like a hill billy lol but i really appreciate your words they mean a lot since you liked it and yes it was about you lol i have missed our talks that's for sure your one of the few who gets me which is cool