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    Wish you were here one more time!

    Things seem so hard and it seems like nothing is going right
    i have tried a one hundred times and one hundred times i failed
    nothing seems to make things feel right. I have been through
    so many face's and seen so many face's but my heart just seems
    so dead since your gone.


    Every time a i sit and think of the times we had i get those feeling's
    that i had when we were once so close but now its just the ghost i
    chase wishing things could have gone better than they did. Another
    minute could have saved us but i chose to walk away because i love you
    and i cant stand the hurt i put you through.


    Places i go i see images of your face and it makes me think of how
    the times we had were so damn crazy, those long nights if staying up
    laughing at nothing , the times we cried over things that seemed unimportant
    to others we were of a kind.I am here now without you but i still feel you here every time i close my eyes.
    Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Aug 28, 2011 at 06:37 PM.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Wish you were here one more time!

    It's ok Holder... You can open your eyes... You don't have to miss me anymore. I'm back! See? ............................ This poem IS about ME right? lol

    Really though, touching piece. Anyone who has ever had to feel the pain of someones absence in their life, could definitely relate to this. You're such a passionate writer, you need no practice when it comes to relaying emotion, But maybe taking more time with your grammar would benefit your writing.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Wish you were here one more time!

    thanks and your right my grammar is a bit off its how i talk in general like a hill billy lol but i really appreciate your words they mean a lot since you liked it and yes it was about you lol i have missed our talks that's for sure your one of the few who gets me which is cool
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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