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Reply With QuoteSimply beautiful. I like how you wrote it like you were speaking of a real person, knowing full well that he's imaginary. It kinda reminds me of my poem "The One"; the way it speaks of a person only to find out they don't exsist.
Well done!
I wish you were real
I wish I could hug you
I wish I would feel the wamrth
I wish I could love you
But you seem to be
Just the fruit of my imagination
Just a memory from a life before
Just you plus the things I'd wish in you
I wish you were real
And all the things that we pretend to do
The hugs and the tickle
And that imaginary place...
But you are not and that place is not
Oh, I'm afraid I could never meet you...
And never hug you
And never ever laugh about the things you do...
I wish you were real
But you're too far to be real
To much of my dreams have joined in you
Too much... Too much...
Goodbye.. Don't mind me...
Simply beautiful. I like how you wrote it like you were speaking of a real person, knowing full well that he's imaginary. It kinda reminds me of my poem "The One"; the way it speaks of a person only to find out they don't exsist.
Well done!
Eeeee... actually that person really exists, no matter how strange it might seem... ^^ Sigh... wish I could write smth. smart like "The One", but I can't... lol
Thank You anyways Sprout. I'm happy to hear the words "Simply beautiful" from you.
i liked it a lot very good job i would love to see more
Nice to hear that ^^ I'm happy you like it... there are more around here on AO ^^
Thank You!!! ^^
i wrote a new one for u to read and the poems u wrote are great
Great poem! Really romantic thats what makes it so beautiful indeed!!!!!!!! So I do hope to see more!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
I read it too levitatinganimelover ^^ And thank You again!
And thank You Kuwi!!! ^^ I'm glad you find this poem romantic and I'm really happy you like it!! ^^
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