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    Wish you were real...

    I wish you were real
    I wish I could hug you
    I wish I would feel the wamrth
    I wish I could love you

    But you seem to be
    Just the fruit of my imagination
    Just a memory from a life before
    Just you plus the things I'd wish in you

    I wish you were real
    And all the things that we pretend to do
    The hugs and the tickle
    And that imaginary place...

    But you are not and that place is not
    Oh, I'm afraid I could never meet you...
    And never hug you
    And never ever laugh about the things you do...

    I wish you were real
    But you're too far to be real
    To much of my dreams have joined in you
    Too much... Too much...
    Goodbye.. Don't mind me...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Wish you were real...

    Simply beautiful. I like how you wrote it like you were speaking of a real person, knowing full well that he's imaginary. It kinda reminds me of my poem "The One"; the way it speaks of a person only to find out they don't exsist.

    Well done!


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    Re: Wish you were real...

    Eeeee... actually that person really exists, no matter how strange it might seem... ^^ Sigh... wish I could write smth. smart like "The One", but I can't... lol

    Thank You anyways Sprout. I'm happy to hear the words "Simply beautiful" from you.

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Wish you were real...

    i liked it a lot very good job i would love to see more

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    Re: Wish you were real...

    Nice to hear that ^^ I'm happy you like it... there are more around here on AO ^^

    Thank You!!! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Wish you were real...

    i wrote a new one for u to read and the poems u wrote are great

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    Re: Wish you were real...

    Great poem! Really romantic thats what makes it so beautiful indeed!!!!!!!! So I do hope to see more!
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    Re: Wish you were real...

    I read it too levitatinganimelover ^^ And thank You again!

    And thank You Kuwi!!! ^^ I'm glad you find this poem romantic and I'm really happy you like it!! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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