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Wishes:
Simple wishes cause the most pain,
Simple wishes of the needy,
Wishes of so many souls,
Searching,
Hoping,
Wrenching in pain,
Why should we be in pain?
Why should we have to wish for what we want?
Why should we suffer to find what we want?
Why?
Why?!
Why...
short....nt bad...:)
but nt ur best work....
AWesome, very fiery feelings in that piece.
u described those who are in povetry, those who suffer in silence.
Gd work, keep it up. BTW i beat u to making a poem abt falling down.
I like it, but, I liked the last one better
mm, it seems to be wishing itself lol.,
a good poem., like a letter to the world a little.,
I like poems that make you think so I made one myself.
I dont' really like it, the emtion is kinda flat and the wording doesn't flow at all.