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    Wishes:

    Simple wishes cause the most pain,
    Simple wishes of the needy,
    Wishes of so many souls,
    Searching,
    Hoping,
    Wrenching in pain,
    Why should we be in pain?
    Why should we have to wish for what we want?
    Why should we suffer to find what we want?
    Why?
    Why?!
    Why...

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    Re: " Wishes " A Tribute to the hoping...

    short....nt bad...
    but nt ur best work....

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    Re: " Wishes " A Tribute to the hoping...

    AWesome, very fiery feelings in that piece.
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    Re: " Wishes " A Tribute to the hoping...

    u described those who are in povetry, those who suffer in silence.

    Gd work, keep it up. BTW i beat u to making a poem abt falling down.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: " Wishes " A Tribute to the hoping...

    I like it, but, I liked the last one better


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    Re: " Wishes " A Tribute to the hoping...

    mm, it seems to be wishing itself lol.,
    a good poem., like a letter to the world a little.,

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    Re: " Wishes " A Tribute to the hoping...

    I like poems that make you think so I made one myself.

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    Re: " Wishes " A Tribute to the hoping...

    I dont' really like it, the emtion is kinda flat and the wording doesn't flow at all.
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