Thread: " Wishes " A Tribute to the hoping...

Will do
/heh I try to add emotion to it but just imagine yourself in self pity while reading the poem.

I am very honest, when it comes to posting my comments, so forgive me, if I say something I shouldn't have said. Anyway! Compared to your other poems, this one, I didn't really like a whole lot. The theme is still great, but you could have done a lot better. Maybe you should try to revise and edit the poem, and fill it up with more meaning. ^_^

-Kedar-

great.........................

Hmm not bad I like it ...

"If only the world could know of a poets pain..."
Always think of that quote when you read my poems.