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    Re: " Wishes " A Tribute to the hoping...

    it wasn't that bad man, i kinda like it, keep it up man.

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    Will do
    /heh I try to add emotion to it but just imagine yourself in self pity while reading the poem.

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    Re: " Wishes " A Tribute to the hoping...

    I am very honest, when it comes to posting my comments, so forgive me, if I say something I shouldn't have said. Anyway! Compared to your other poems, this one, I didn't really like a whole lot. The theme is still great, but you could have done a lot better. Maybe you should try to revise and edit the poem, and fill it up with more meaning. ^_^

    -Kedar-

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    Re: " Wishes " A Tribute to the hoping...

    great.........................

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    Re: " Wishes " A Tribute to the hoping...

    Hmm not bad I like it ...

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    Re: " Wishes " A Tribute to the hoping...

    "If only the world could know of a poets pain..."
    Always think of that quote when you read my poems.
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