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    Wishful Thinking

    a poem about my brother... and how much i miss him sence hes been gone..........
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    a wishful thought only if you was here...
    oh to be free from that awful place
    as the years go by you'll be here basides there,
    ever so happy just seeing your face

    ten years is so long just four to go,
    I keep you in my heart even if its torn
    tears fall down my face how I wish you was here...
    I know one thing i'm lucky to still have you

    just so colse like family should be,
    happy to call you my brother
    we are so close as everyone can see,
    joy will come to my face knowing you'll be home

    as I lay here I keep wishing you was here,
    seeing you once a month is never enough
    happy seeing your smiling face knowing your ok,
    your my brother, my friend, and my hero....
    Last edited by dark angle; May 18, 2010 at 10:28 AM.

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    Re: Wishful Thinking

    is your brother dead or someting because thats what i get from this poem and if he is im sorry.

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    outstanding i never thought this day would come for you to write a wishful and yet very hopeful which is powerful of compassionate care for your long lost brother is he is. This is truly a work of art right from your deepest heart i enjoy it and yet somewhat tearful please show more of your work please?

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    Re: Wishful Thinking

    it is indeed well written, what i get out of it is that you and your brother is connected in more ways then one, the bonds of your family is strong, it talks of desperation, longingness, and peace, i love it, it is amaising two of the opposite things can be closer then two of the same things.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Trojan man View Post
    is your brother dead or someting because thats what i get from this poem and if he is im sorry.
    oh no see he is in jail..... so that how i feel that i don't get to see him much because of a mastake..... so its sad..... so i just can't wait till he gets out

    Quote Originally Posted by dark1angel View Post
    outstanding i never thought this day would come for you to write a wishful and yet very hopeful which is powerful of compassionate care for your long lost brother is he is. This is truly a work of art right from your deepest heart i enjoy it and yet somewhat tearful please show more of your work please?
    aww thank you so much i'm happy you like it. this poem really did come deep within my heart. i love and care about my brother so much.

    Quote Originally Posted by Dragons2801 View Post
    it is indeed well written, what i get out of it is that you and your brother is connected in more ways then one, the bonds of your family is strong, it talks of desperation, longingness, and peace, i love it, it is amaising two of the opposite things can be closer then two of the same things.
    thank you. yeah, him and i do had that strong bond we share that we both show we love and care about one and nother
    Last edited by LenMiyata; May 19, 2010 at 09:49 AM.

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    Re: Wishful Thinking

    There has been always moments of seeing a person behind bars when it comes to a family member being separated from the flock and turned into a black sheep but in this case there is never been a flaw of mistakes that happened and i wish there was some way for you to reunite with your brother and stay together as strong family members.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dark1angel View Post
    There has been always moments of seeing a person behind bars when it comes to a family member being separated from the flock and turned into a black sheep but in this case there is never been a flaw of mistakes that happened and i wish there was some way for you to reunite with your brother and stay together as strong family members.


    yeah but we i go to vist him he isn't behind bars thank god i get to hug talk to him face to face so that makes me happy that i can be close to him when i go to vist him. i love seeing he is ok and seeing his happy face cheers me right up. ^_^

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    Re: Wishful Thinking

    Quote Originally Posted by dark angle View Post
    yeah but we i go to vist him he isn't behind bars thank god i get to hug talk to him face to face so that makes me happy that i can be close to him when i go to vist him. i love seeing he is ok and seeing his happy face cheers me right up. ^_^
    thats a good thing into what your doing and i apologized into the bars thing i had no idea anyways make the best poems in this community and you'll get the right amount of good inputs of your hard effort from writing the right kind of poetry that comes from the heart so yeah hope i get to see more from you.

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