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    Wishing upon a star, the perils of her soul

    When she wished upon a star on a cold lonely night
    A singe glass tear drops on her lap
    Attuned with tears, she is enveloped in darkness with fright
    Holding herself in still crap

    Transitions of time, she was lost in these world forsaken!
    Eternal perils of her soul
    In chains, of which it suffers greatly holes barren
    Thus making her anoint foul

    The sky coast clear with no stars sight ahead, this preludes dear
    Reminiscing the times reel
    Often hearing her cries make a closure within prowess clear
    She raised her hand and stares to steel

    The eternal perils of her soul in chains of which it
    Suffers greatly so deep scars
    In this darkness which she lies helplessly, tremendous pit
    These lonely red rose rifts afar
    Last edited by receiverofhell; Oct 26, 2010 at 06:16 AM. Reason: wrong
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...

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