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    Without a Doubt

    Always and forever.
    Forever and never.
    Never to trust you and never to Doubt.
    Always to tell you how I found my way out.

    I found Death intoxicating.
    And Life Like A Love.
    Alone And Frightened plus all of the above
    to be the things I foverver will love.

    This may not make sence
    But I really don't care.
    I forever will be the Malice and the Gore.
    And the matted down hair.

    Plastered With Blood drying on you skin,
    Is always the way I imagined you within.
    The way you look now is all a lie.
    For I see Who you are between the pale flesh
    and the way you cry.

    But none of that matters.
    For all of that is what I love.

    Love Is never an on topic thing.
    So I promice to loose all my doubt,
    On your One Topic dream.
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    This is sortof an ongoing storry.. in poem form.
    if it dosen't make sence then just ask. there is no reason to be confused.

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    Re: Without a Doubt

    A few spelling errors but a good poem.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Without a Doubt

    must agree... maybe you meant "sense" and not "sence"... and also "promise", not "promice".. ^^ maybe you need a little help from the dictionary, dear... the poem's good, though... nice job...

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    Re: Without a Doubt

    There are a few spelling errors, but still it was a nice poem.

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