A few spelling errors but a good poem.
Always and forever.
Forever and never.
Never to trust you and never to Doubt.
Always to tell you how I found my way out.
I found Death intoxicating.
And Life Like A Love.
Alone And Frightened plus all of the above
to be the things I foverver will love.
This may not make sence
But I really don't care.
I forever will be the Malice and the Gore.
And the matted down hair.
Plastered With Blood drying on you skin,
Is always the way I imagined you within.
The way you look now is all a lie.
For I see Who you are between the pale flesh
and the way you cry.
But none of that matters.
For all of that is what I love.
Love Is never an on topic thing.
So I promice to loose all my doubt,
On your One Topic dream.
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This is sortof an ongoing storry.. in poem form.
if it dosen't make sence then just ask. there is no reason to be confused.
A few spelling errors but a good poem.
Seduced by Flesh
must agree... maybe you meant "sense" and not "sence"... and also "promise", not "promice".. ^^ maybe you need a little help from the dictionary, dear... the poem's good, though... nice job...
They say you can't use oversized signatures here on AO.
There are a few spelling errors, but still it was a nice poem.
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