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    Without Her Forever

    Without Her Forever

    The moon, It is so beautiful.
    But not as beautiful as she.
    For she is my love, she is my destiny.
    Without her love,
    the beauty of the moon would not matter.
    Without her passion,
    the vast seas would become an abyss of nothingness.
    Without her touch,
    the star filled heavens would crash all around me,
    and become hopeless.
    Without her warmth,
    the night would freeze my heart.
    For without her soul,
    I will become but a grain of sand,
    on the sandy beaches she has left behind.
    When I looked into her eyes tonight ...
    I saw forever in a sea of passion.
    But, I will never have her.
    I've waited far too long ...
    And she has set sail with another.
    Is she happy?
    Why did she look back at me?
    I saw hope in her eyes ...
    And then that hope faded in my realization that,
    she was ... gone.
    I will always remember her and know,
    that she will live on,
    even as my heart dies.
    She has long since been lost to me.
    But, I shall never stop loving her.
    She will live on,
    deep in my heart,
    Where fire and passion still churn.
    Will I ever see her again?
    Without her forever.

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    Re: Without Her Forever

    Dang it's dark.
    Good work.

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    Re: Without Her Forever

    Thank you. I had lost her. It was my own fault. I made the decision to let her go so she'd be better off. I didn't think I deserved her. *Sigh* I am still dust on that beach.

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    Re: Without Her Forever

    Quote Originally Posted by Dark Raven
    Thank you. I had lost her. It was my own fault. I made the decision to let her go so she'd be better off. I didn't think I deserved her. *Sigh* I am still dust on that beach.
    Dust is merely collected dirt, troubles of the past which eventually get carried of by the wind. Nicely done.


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    Re: Without Her Forever

    wow man, that was a really awesome poem man, keep it up.

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    Kool, man. Very dark and interestin'. Keep up the good work.

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    Re: Without Her Forever

    I liked it I'm not even into Poetry but that def compelled me. Keep it up.
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    Re: Without Her Forever

    First loves are so great. I like it. For someone whos only wrote a few, it's good.

    Keep up the work.
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