A Womans Mind

LostbutFound · Nov 07, 2007, 02:28 PM

A womans Mind, Such a beautiful Place.
Worth More then Famous actors or a models
"pretty" face.
A place One one a kind, Where no man can lurk
Where a woman can be alone, and Never be hurt.
The things a woman imagines are worth far more
Then gold.
Hidden secrets And stories left untold.
Each one of us is different and unique
No two ever being the same.
A womens mind Secrets inside the only thing
man could never truley tame

Astaroth · Nov 07, 2007, 03:18 PM

This is sweet and refreshing.......
Great job!!!!!!!!!

LostbutFound · Nov 07, 2007, 03:26 PM

Thanx it looks kinda short but when i wrote it it looked way longer

Astaroth · Nov 07, 2007, 03:29 PM

It is still very god!!!!!!!!
You are welcome............

LostbutFound · Nov 07, 2007, 03:52 PM

Thanx i wrote it at lunch today and im happy you like

fireandice · Nov 07, 2007, 06:26 PM

What you just said is the truth to every women. Very nicely done, well written, and very creative. I hope to see somemore of your stuff.

*RayMe* · Nov 07, 2007, 07:56 PM

Hmm.. a beautiful poem that speaks of womans inner beauty and secret... you could make it longer and with more descriptions though.. but it is still very good..

i agree with fireandice too... creative indeed ^^ and very well written... keep it up

will read more of yours from now on..so hoping you will write more ^^

LostbutFound · Nov 08, 2007, 08:45 AM

Thanx i have tons im just never on the comp. Any more but i will be sure to publish

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LostbutFound Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Behind you ...........boo Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 814	A Womans Mind A womans Mind, Such a beautiful Place. Worth More then Famous actors or a models "pretty" face. A place One one a kind, Where no man can lurk Where a woman can be alone, and Never be hurt. The things a woman imagines are worth far more Then gold. Hidden secrets And stories left untold. Each one of us is different and unique No two ever being the same. A womens mind Secrets inside the only thing man could never truley tame __________________ Ok in order to judge other you first have to be able to judge yourself, then we must all except each others as equals
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Astaroth Chtonian Slayer Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: you really do not want to know Posts: 563 Thanks: 23 Thanked 47 Times in 45 Posts Credits: 31,449	Re: A Womans Mind This is sweet and refreshing....... Great job!!!!!!!!! __________________ DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
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LostbutFound Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Behind you ...........boo Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 814	Re: A Womans Mind Thanx it looks kinda short but when i wrote it it looked way longer __________________ Ok in order to judge other you first have to be able to judge yourself, then we must all except each others as equals
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Astaroth Chtonian Slayer Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: you really do not want to know Posts: 563 Thanks: 23 Thanked 47 Times in 45 Posts Credits: 31,449	Re: A Womans Mind It is still very god!!!!!!!! You are welcome............ __________________ DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
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fireandice ~always by your side~ Join Date: May 2007 Location: small little hick town Posts: 517 Thanks: 19 Thanked 17 Times in 17 Posts Credits: 10,440	Re: A Womans Mind What you just said is the truth to every women. Very nicely done, well written, and very creative. I hope to see somemore of your stuff. __________________
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,148	Re: A Womans Mind Hmm.. a beautiful poem that speaks of womans inner beauty and secret... you could make it longer and with more descriptions though.. but it is still very good.. i agree with fireandice too... creative indeed ^^ and very well written... keep it up will read more of yours from now on..so hoping you will write more ^^ __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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LostbutFound Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Behind you ...........boo Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 814	Re: A Womans Mind Thanx i have tons im just never on the comp. Any more but i will be sure to publish __________________ Ok in order to judge other you first have to be able to judge yourself, then we must all except each others as equals
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