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Mar 09, 2008, 12:47 AM
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 Credits: 1,783 | "this won't matter in 2 months" Tell me that it’s not the end, Let me see the light you see. Hold me close my dearest friend, And say that you will stay with me. Walk with me along this path, And tell me that no matter what… You’ll hold me in the aftermath, You wont leave me alone to rot. Share with me the memory, And kiss me now and every day. Tell me that you’ll hold me close, And watch the bright stars fade away. |
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Mar 11, 2008, 08:56 AM
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Credits: 13,393 | Re: "this won't matter in 2 months" I can't believe no one commented on this. I loved the wording and flow of this. THe last line was my very favorite. The feeling that comes through the melencholy, is beautiful.
__________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell. |
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