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    Angry Wonder Boy

    Wonder boy...
    You can not fly.
    No energy beams from your eyes.
    Hey! What's that up in the sky?
    Not you, you're just a regular guy.

    Your lack of presence
    makes her miserable.
    Perhaps your power is
    turning invisible...
    I really think that's pitiful.

    If promises were
    a super-power,
    who would need you
    thier darkest hour?
    Will you ever follow through,
    or will it all turn sour?

    Wonder boy...
    I give you this name,
    because with you, it's all the same.
    It's a wonder she's still playing your game
    and hasn't left you for being so lame...
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    Re: Wonder Boy

    Your lack of precence
    makes her miserable.
    Perhaps your power is
    turning invisible...
    I really think that's pitiful.
    This reminds me of the song invisible by Clay Aiken... i love that song... a very nice song and the theme is almost like this poem...

    A nicely written poem... I love the way you use wonder boy (which is to the girl you are) but when the truth is...you are just a regular person... creative work.. i love the rhyme a lot... nicely done there.. ^^ and i love this part...

    Hey! What's that up in the sky?
    Not you, you're just a regular guy.
    xD nice... a good poem conveyed the meaning and nicely put to use the wonder boyness.... good job ^^

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    Re: Wonder Boy

    this is somewhat, funny to me. i don't know why, the whole poem just sounds crazy. i like it, a lot. poor wonder boy, i'd hate to be him with you around.

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    Re: Wonder Boy

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post


    This reminds me of the song invisible by Clay Aiken... i love that song... a very nice song and the theme is almost like this poem...

    A nicely written poem... I love the way you use wonder boy (which is to the girl you are) but when the truth is...you are just a regular person... creative work.. i love the rhyme a lot... nicely done there.. ^^ and i love this part...



    xD nice... a good poem conveyed the meaning and nicely put to use the wonder boyness.... good job ^^
    Quote Originally Posted by 3cheersforrevenge View Post
    this is somewhat, funny to me. i don't know why, the whole poem just sounds crazy. i like it, a lot. poor wonder boy, i'd hate to be him with you around.
    First let me start by saying thanks to the both of you for taking the time to read my poetry. I greatly appreciate it. ^_^

    Actually, Ray, this poem is about someone else--not me--that's why I down-talk "wonder boy" so much. "Boy, it's a wonder he's still with her!" That's what I was goin' for, LOL. It's kinda funny you'd compare this with Clay Aiken--eww--I find myself talkin' trash about Mr. Aiken alot, so I'm humored by your comparison.

    3cheers, I'm glad you found this entertaining, so did 59wayz when I showed this to him on paper last night. ^_^ Yeah, me and "Wonder Boy" aren't really the best of friends so, were I him, I wouldn't wanna be near me either, LOL.


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