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    A Wonderful,Yet Confuseing Feeling

    Here's a new song/poem that I just wrote.Yes it's another love sadly lol Don't ask me why i've been writting love 1's lately,I don't even know myself lol Well I hope everybody likes them. Please comment,thanks


    Title-A Wonderful,Yet Confuseing Feeling


    I'm so cold and all alone
    I have no where to go
    I have no where to go back to
    I'm all alone and i'm so cold...

    "Why am I left all alone?"

    I do not understand these feelings,that I seem to have
    What are these feelings,that are inside of me?
    When I look at you,my heart skips a beat
    And when you see me,it get's to warm for comfort...

    "Why do I have these feelings?"

    You seem to know what these feelings mean
    I ask you to show me and you gladly do
    You show me with your loving gaze
    You show me when you embrace me tightly
    You show me with every kiss you give me
    You show me by saying that you love me...

    "Is this what true love is like?"

    I feel so warm inside,i'm no longer cold at all
    I feel so safe in your tight embrace,i'm no longer alone
    You kiss me lightly,while you say you love me
    I sigh in prue bliss,glad that i'm safe and not all alone...

    "I'm finally warm and no longer all alone"

    I finally know what these feelings are,that have been inside of me
    I can finally show and tell the one I love how I feel...

    "I've always wanted to say this,but never knew how till you showed me the light"

    "You are my sun and moon"
    "You are what's keeping me alive and not breaking apart inside"
    "I'm so grateful for all you have done for me"

    "I've wanted to say this for such a long time and that is..."

    "I love you with all of my heart and soul"...
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    Re: A Wonderful,Yet Confuseing Feeling

    wow this is is purly romantic ad full of want and desire to be held/ i like this poem
    it says so much with few wrods said just like love when you find it. awesome poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Thank you for the lovely comment big brother. I'm happy that you liked it.It took me forever 2 write it though lol
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    Re: A Wonderful,Yet Confuseing Feeling

    well it isnt how long it takes its what you have to say thats important and thats what makes a poem so awesoem you never no one its done till your soul tels you to stop
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: A Wonderful,Yet Confuseing Feeling

    Yes your right.I guess I was just trying 2 sort out all of my feelings so that I could write them. lol
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    Re: A Wonderful,Yet Confuseing Feeling

    good poem............................................yo u truly must be in love to write these type of lyrics.....................lol.................... ......great poem..................

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    Re: A Wonderful,Yet Confuseing Feeling

    Thanks Bro I'm happy that you liked it. Well....ummm..*blushes* I am...
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    Re: A Wonderful,Yet Confuseing Feeling

    so have you posted the dark one you were talking about............................

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