Shinigami's_Angel

Here's a new song/poem that I just wrote.Yes it's another love sadly lol Don't ask me why i've been writting love 1's lately,I don't even know myself lol Well I hope everybody likes them. Please comment,thanks


Title-A Wonderful,Yet Confuseing Feeling


I'm so cold and all alone
I have no where to go
I have no where to go back to
I'm all alone and i'm so cold...

"Why am I left all alone?"

I do not understand these feelings,that I seem to have
What are these feelings,that are inside of me?
When I look at you,my heart skips a beat
And when you see me,it get's to warm for comfort...

"Why do I have these feelings?"

You seem to know what these feelings mean
I ask you to show me and you gladly do
You show me with your loving gaze
You show me when you embrace me tightly
You show me with every kiss you give me
You show me by saying that you love me...

"Is this what true love is like?"

I feel so warm inside,i'm no longer cold at all
I feel so safe in your tight embrace,i'm no longer alone
You kiss me lightly,while you say you love me
I sigh in prue bliss,glad that i'm safe and not all alone...

"I'm finally warm and no longer all alone"

I finally know what these feelings are,that have been inside of me
I can finally show and tell the one I love how I feel...

"I've always wanted to say this,but never knew how till you showed me the light"

"You are my sun and moon"
"You are what's keeping me alive and not breaking apart inside"
"I'm so grateful for all you have done for me"

"I've wanted to say this for such a long time and that is..."

"I love you with all of my heart and soul"...

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HolderOfTheDarkChalice

wow this is is purly romantic ad full of want and desire to be held/ i like this poem
it says so much with few wrods said just like love when you find it. awesome poem

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Shinigami's_Angel

Thank you for the lovely comment big brother. I'm happy that you liked it.It took me forever 2 write it though lol

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HolderOfTheDarkChalice

well it isnt how long it takes its what you have to say thats important and thats what makes a poem so awesoem you never no one its done till your soul tels you to stop

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Shinigami's_Angel

Yes your right.I guess I was just trying 2 sort out all of my feelings so that I could write them. lol

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Heartless_mage

good poem............................................yo u truly must be in love to write these type of lyrics.....................lol.................... ......great poem..................

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Shinigami's_Angel

Thanks Bro I'm happy that you liked it. Well....ummm..*blushes* I am...

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Heartless_mage

so have you posted the dark one you were talking about............................

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Shinigami's_Angel

Oh that 1 lol Yeah it's posted up.It's called "First Drop Of Blood"

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Heartless_mage

i remember that one.............................*cowers in corner*..........................

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Shinigami's_Angel

I'm sure you do lol It was a bit over board you could say lol But I still think it came out pretty well lol

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