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Well I'll just wait
Until you get back
Sometimes I wonder
If I should've let you go
You never write back
Or even return my calls
I havn't talked to you
For so long now
You became a star
And forgot about me
So now I'm left alone
With only memories.....
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Well this happened to me
A while back.....hmmm
Didn't think I remembered till now.....
This is a wonderful poem and it is written well... I like the way it was set up too.. it's good and keep it up...
i like your poem,it's nice but it's a little sad to.
you really miss the person you're talking about.
have no idea why she posted on it :rolleyes1:,umm i dont think akura will like that but oh well,Quote:
Originally Posted by Jamie5192
very nice poem akura i loved the wording great job keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
oh do you wanna know??? i was bored and had nothing better to do^_^ that and it is a good poem.Quote:
Originally Posted by iluvmyloser
awwwwww thats not quite far to do that to anyone ...
but great in puting it into works ^^
I like it good work.
It was attention grabbing and it held through to the end. Good work .
Hope to see more.
It's very good. I can feel the heartfeltness of it. . .