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    Wondering.....

    Well I'll just wait
    Until you get back
    Sometimes I wonder
    If I should've let you go

    You never write back
    Or even return my calls
    I havn't talked to you
    For so long now

    You became a star
    And forgot about me
    So now I'm left alone
    With only memories.....
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    Well this happened to me
    A while back.....hmmm
    Didn't think I remembered till now.....



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    Re: Wondering.....

    This is a wonderful poem and it is written well... I like the way it was set up too.. it's good and keep it up...

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    Re: Wondering.....

    i like your poem,it's nice but it's a little sad to.
    you really miss the person you're talking about.

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    Re: Wondering.....

    Quote Originally Posted by Jamie5192 View Post
    This is a wonderful poem and it is written well... I like the way it was set up too.. it's good and keep it up...
    have no idea why she posted on it ,umm i dont think akura will like that but oh well,
    very nice poem akura i loved the wording great job keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Wondering.....

    Quote Originally Posted by iluvmyloser View Post
    have no idea why she posted on it ,umm i dont think akura will like that but oh well,
    very nice poem akura i loved the wording great job keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    oh do you wanna know??? i was bored and had nothing better to do^_^ that and it is a good poem.


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    Re: Wondering.....

    awwwwww thats not quite far to do that to anyone ...

    but great in puting it into works ^^

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    Re: Wondering.....

    I like it good work.

    It was attention grabbing and it held through to the end. Good work .

    Hope to see more.

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    Re: Wondering.....

    It's very good. I can feel the heartfeltness of it. . .

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