Wondering.....

Akura13 · Aug 25, 2007, 11:57 PM

Well I'll just wait
Until you get back
Sometimes I wonder
If I should've let you go

You never write back
Or even return my calls
I havn't talked to you
For so long now

You became a star
And forgot about me
So now I'm left alone
With only memories.....
__________________
Well this happened to me
A while back.....hmmm
Didn't think I remembered till now.....

!Jamie5192 · Aug 26, 2007, 12:08 AM

This is a wonderful poem and it is written well... I like the way it was set up too.. it's good and keep it up...

arekandera · Aug 26, 2007, 12:33 AM

i like your poem,it's nice but it's a little sad to.
you really miss the person you're talking about.

iluvmyloser · Aug 26, 2007, 09:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jamie5192

This is a wonderful poem and it is written well... I like the way it was set up too.. it's good and keep it up...

have no idea why she posted on it

,umm i dont think akura will like that but oh well,
very nice poem akura i loved the wording great job keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥

!Jamie5192 · Aug 26, 2007, 09:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by iluvmyloser

have no idea why she posted on it

,umm i dont think akura will like that but oh well,
very nice poem akura i loved the wording great job keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥

oh do you wanna know??? i was bored and had nothing better to do^_^ that and it is a good poem.

*equinn* · Aug 26, 2007, 12:16 PM

awwwwww thats not quite far to do that to anyone ...

but great in puting it into works ^^

*P.R. Princess* · Aug 26, 2007, 12:21 PM

I like it good work.

It was attention grabbing and it held through to the end. Good work .

Hope to see more.

shadowrulz · Aug 26, 2007, 02:11 PM

It's very good. I can feel the heartfeltness of it. . .

Akura13 · Aug 27, 2007, 06:06 PM

Thanks all you people I appreciate your comments!^^ I'm glad all of you liked it!^^

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