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    Words

    Words to despise
    words to please,
    words in disguise
    and words in the trees.

    It fades in the quiet
    yet here it remains,
    proof of the riot
    clear as the rains.

    This living soul
    gives in completely
    to love's divine toll,
    singing sweetly.

    Wondrous thy form
    for it so teaches
    the touch to be warm,
    and softly it reaches

    over the heart
    and into its rooms.
    Words from the start
    wearing costumes.

    ---
    It's been a long time, hasn't it.
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: Words

    This was sustainable yet terse and sweetened with a charming simplicity. A pleasant composition.

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    Re: Words

    @Flawedmind: Indeed its been a long time , such great pleasure to read your poem

    Words indeed touches everyone in every way... words affect differently from one person to another... good thing there are words for us to use and understand... without words... oh my... it would be hard... I believe... words can make or break...

    And that is indeed a great poem

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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